Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答题时要直接且简洁地回应问题，注意语法和用词。你的回答应包含主题句，然后用一到两句支持细节。避免拼写和词序错误（如“lookout”应为“look out of the window”，“is so reality”应改为“is so real”或“feels very real”）。可使用连接词来使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling by bus or car. I find the passing landscapes interesting and they help me relax, especially when the route goes through countryside or small towns.

Gợi ý: 回答应更准确并补充具体原因或例子。修正语法错误（如“taking photo live photos”不通，应为“taking photos”或“live photos”），避免不完整句（“because it is.”需完成）。使用连接词给出原因或例子，使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because it lets me capture memorable moments. For example, I always photograph colourful sunsets or interesting buildings so I can look back on the trip later.

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意语法和表达顺序。用一到两句说明偏好的原因并加上具体细节。修正短语（如“grew up from the seaside”应为“grew up by the sea”或“near the sea”，“see make me calm down”应为“the sea calms me down”）。可以加入一个具体场景来增强说服力。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I grew up near the coast and it always calms me down. For instance, listening to the waves helps me reflect on my goals and feel more peaceful after a busy week.

× Totally, yes, I think the scenery from lookout the window when traveling by bus or car is so reality.

✓ Yes, I totally do. I think the scenery I see out of the window when traveling by bus or car looks so real.

错误类型：时态/动词搭配、词序和形容词用法（对应题单中的“Present tense issue”“Incorrect use of prepositions”“Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”和“Sentence structure errors”）。 问题说明及改进建议： 1) “from lookout the window” 词序和用法错误。应使用固定搭配“see out of the window”或“look out of the window”。建议把短语改为“see out of the window”或“I look out of the window”。 2) “is so reality” 中 reality 是名词，需用形容词 real 来修饰主语，且这里用系动词“looks”比“is”更自然：用“looks so real”。 3) 开头的回答可以更自然地分成两句：“Yes, I totally do.” 然后说明原因。 改进建议：多记常用搭配（see/look out of the window；look/feel/look+adjective），注意名词和形容词的区分，以及保持自然的英语句子顺序。

× Of course, I like taking photo live photos of the scenery outside the car window because it is. It can record what I experience.

✓ Of course. I like taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because they can record what I experience.

错误类型：量词/复数形式与词汇选择错误（对应题单中的“Incorrect use of quantifiers”“Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”）。 问题说明及改进建议： 1) “taking photo live photos” 重复且不符合语法，应为复数“taking photos”。去掉多余的词“live”。 2) “because it is.” 句子不完整且代词不明确。前句主语是“photos”，应使用复数代词“they”。因此后半句改为“because they can record what I experience.” 3) 注意名词单复数：photo→photos。并保持代词与先行词在人称和数上的一致。 改进建议：练习名词单复数变化和代词指代（it vs they），避免冗余词语。

× I prefer the seaside scenery because I grew up from the seaside and see make me calm down to think what I am and what I want to be.

✓ I prefer seaside scenery because I grew up at the seaside, and seeing it calms me down and helps me think about who I am and what I want to be.

错误类型：介词使用、句子结构以及动词形式错误（对应题单中的“Incorrect use of prepositions”“Sentence structure errors”和“Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”）。 问题说明及改进建议： 1) “grew up from the seaside” 介词应为“at”或“by”而不是“from”。常用说法是“grow up at/in/near a place”。 2) “see make me calm down” 结构混乱，应使用动名词短语“seeing it calms me down”或“seeing the sea makes me calm”。 3) “to think what I am and what I want to be” 不自然，建议用“helps me think about who I am and what I want to be”。 4) 注意连词和并列结构，使用逗号和连接词使句子更通顺。 改进建议：复习常见介词搭配（grow up at/in/near），动名词作主语时的用法（Seeing + 主语 + 动词），以及how to use “help someone do/ help someone to do” 和 “think about + 内容”。