Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak in full, grammatically correct sentences and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "car, bus or car") and filler sounds. Also use correct verb forms ("when I travel", "I always look") and provide a brief specific example of what you notice outside.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching houses and people going about their day, and I often notice changing landscapes like farmland or busy streets. Because it relaxes me, I sometimes take a moment to observe details such as shops or street performers.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, correct grammar, and provide a clear, specific example. Use linking words (for example, especially when) and avoid unclear phrases and repeated words. Explain why you take photos and what kind of scenes you capture. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the window, especially when we drive through especially scenic areas. For example, on a recent road trip I photographed a series of colourful fishing boats and coastal cliffs because the light was beautiful. I usually share these photos with friends to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons using linking phrases (because, for example, so). Use correct vocabulary ("I prefer the sea/the beach"), avoid vague fragments, and mention concrete activities or sensations (walking on the sand, swimming, eating seafood). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea and the beach because I find the coast more relaxing. For example, I enjoy walking on the sand, swimming, and eating fresh seafood while listening to the waves. The beach helps me unwind after a busy week.

× Yes, when I traveling with my car, bus or car, I always looking out the window and see what people says or the landscape away. Interesting the outside to say something interesting, uh.

✓ Yes, when I am traveling by car or bus, I always look out the window and see what people say and the landscape. The outside is interesting and often says something interesting.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'am' with present continuous ('I am traveling'); incorrect progressive form 'I always looking' should be simple present 'I always look' for habitual action; incorrect preposition 'with my car, bus or car' corrected to 'by car or bus'; subject-verb agreement 'people says' should be 'people say'; awkward fragments removed and clarified. Suggestion: Use 'am/is/are + -ing' for actions in progress, and simple present for habitual actions; ensure subject and verb match in number.

× Yes, I often take photos of things outside the car window, especially when it travels through the the the interesting area capture the next steps happening to you. None of the the chip and shell uh, then chasing moment to my friends. For example, on the resume journey, I photographed Ronnie Hughes.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of things outside the car window, especially when we travel through interesting areas and I want to capture moments. I sometimes share those moments with my friends. For example, on a recent trip, I photographed a person named Ronnie Hughes.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'it travels' should be 'we travel' or 'the car travels' to match subject; repeated words removed; awkward use of 'capture the next steps happening to you' rewritten to 'capture moments'; unclear fragments 'None of the the chip and shell' removed and clarified; 'resume journey' is wrong word choice, corrected to 'recent trip'. Suggestion: Choose correct subject for verbs, avoid repetition, and use clear nouns ('trip' instead of 'resume'). Use present simple for habitual actions and past simple for specific past events.

× I prefer the things because I enjoy the sea, beach. You walk around beach and then during the seafood. When they play by the beach, they're very relaxed and. MMM from without.

✓ I prefer the sea and the beach because I enjoy them. You can walk along the beach and eat seafood. When people play on the beach, they are very relaxed.

Errors: vague and incorrect pronoun 'the things' replaced with specific nouns; missing object pronoun 'them' after 'enjoy'; incorrect article and preposition usage 'walk around beach' corrected to 'walk along the beach'; 'during the seafood' is incorrect; changed to 'eat seafood'; unclear 'they're very relaxed and. MMM from without' clarified to 'they are very relaxed'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns instead of 'things', match pronouns to their antecedents, use appropriate prepositions ('along the beach'), and complete sentences without filler sounds.