Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g. "peoples", "join myself alone"). Use varied vocabulary like "private" or "comfortable."

Ví dụ: I usually prefer travelling by car because it feels more private and efficient. For example, I can control the music and stop when I want, which makes the journey more comfortable. Therefore I rarely enjoy crowded buses.

Gợi ý: Be careful with phrasing and tone. Begin with a direct answer, then give a brief, specific reason and avoid negative self-judgments like "That's stupid." Use linking words such as "however" or "usually" and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I take photos from the car window, but not often because I usually prefer to enjoy the view in the moment. However, if the landscape is particularly striking, I will stop and take a few pictures.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a concise explanation with specific details. Avoid filler words ("uh", repeated "I"). Use linking words to compare and give brief examples of what you enjoy about each place.

Ví dụ: I like both the mountains and the sea because they offer different kinds of relaxation. For instance, the mountains are quiet and good for hiking, whereas the sea is great for swimming and watching sunsets, so I enjoy them for different reasons.

× I prefer travelling by car. I think it's more personal, efficient.

✓ I prefer travelling by car. I think it's more private and efficient.

The adjective 'personal' is not the best collocation for describing a mode of transport; 'private' is more natural. Also two adjectives should be parallel and clear. Use words that collocate with 'car' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: Replace 'personal' with 'private' and keep parallel adjectives ('private and efficient').

× I don't want to share the space with other peoples, which will make me awkward.

✓ I don't want to share the space with other people, which makes me feel awkward.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'person' is 'people'. The relative clause tense should match general statement: use present simple 'makes' not future 'will make'. Also 'feel awkward' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'other people' and 'makes me feel awkward'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I like to join myself alone.

✓ I like to be alone.

'Join myself alone' is ungrammatical; reflexive 'myself' isn't used this way. Use 'be alone' or 'have time alone'. Suggestion: 'I like to be alone.' Grammar problem type ID: 15

× Sometimes I will I I do that.

✓ Sometimes I do that.

The phrase 'I will I I do that' is ungrammatical and repeats words. For habitual actions use present simple 'I do that', not 'will'. Suggestion: say 'Sometimes I do that.' Grammar problem type ID: 7

× It depends the mood I have currently, but most of the time I don't take photos of scenery outside.

✓ It depends on my current mood, but most of the time I don't take photos of the scenery outside.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'depends' and awkward word order. 'Currently' changes position: 'my current mood' is natural. Also include article 'the' before 'scenery' when referring to specific scenery. Suggestion: 'It depends on my current mood, but most of the time I don't take photos of the scenery outside.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× That's stupid.

✓ I find that unnecessary.

'That's stupid' is blunt and may be inappropriate; also not a grammar error but register/style. Suggest a more appropriate phrase describing the action rather than labeling it 'stupid'. Use 'I find that unnecessary' or 'I don't usually do that.' Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I, I like to say I like both.

✓ I like to say I like both.

Repeating 'I,' is a hesitation; remove extra 'I,' for grammatical correctness. No tense change needed. Suggestion: 'I like to say I like both.' Grammar problem type ID: 14

× I enjoy, uh, multiple environment which can bring me peaceful.

✓ I enjoy different environments that make me feel peaceful.

'Multiple environment' is ungrammatical; use 'different environments' (plural). 'Which can bring me peaceful' is incorrect structure: 'make me feel peaceful' is natural. Use defining relative 'that' for essential clauses. Suggestion: 'I enjoy different environments that make me feel peaceful.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× So I think both mountains and seas can make me peaceful.

✓ So I think both the mountains and the sea can make me feel peaceful.

'Seas' is odd when paired with 'mountains'—use singular 'the sea' or 'the seas' depending on meaning; more natural: 'the mountains and the sea'. Also add 'feel' after 'make me' for the correct expression. Include definite articles to refer to those environments. Suggestion: 'both the mountains and the sea can make me feel peaceful.' Grammar problem type ID: 1}]}