Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes for sure. I really love looking out from my windows car when I drive in the car. For example, when I drive in the highway, I really love looking the landscape, maybe during the sunset time. Wow, amazing colors. Red.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, for sure. In particularly I remember when I get a plane that's amazing because from that kind of window I can see mountains and countryside in the hare. So wow, amazing, amazing, beautiful. Moreover, I really like when I drive a car watching other.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
I'm not able to answer really this question because I like mountain but also see as well. For example, during summer time I like to go to Sardinia, but also I like to go to the mountain hiking because I really love fresh air during the summer time maybe maybe.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Risposta: Sii più chiaro e conciso. Inizia con una frase che risponde direttamente alla domanda, poi aggiungi uno o due dettagli specifici usando parole di collegamento (ad esempio "for example", "especially"). Evita ripetizioni e interiezioni non necessarie come "wow". Controlla la grammatica delle espressioni: "looking out of the car window", "when I drive on the highway", "I love watching the landscape at sunset". Mantieni massimo 3-4 frasi ben strutturate.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the car window when I travel. For example, I enjoy watching the landscape when I drive on the highway, especially at sunset because the colours are very beautiful. I often focus on the changing light and distant hills.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Risposta: Rispondi direttamente e mantieni la coerenza. Usa lessico appropriato come "especially" e frasi corrette: "when I take a plane" o "on a plane"; evita parole sbagliate come "hare". Fornisci dettagli specifici (che tipo di paesaggi, quando scatti foto) usando connettivi come "for example" o "because". Non ripetere esclamazioni e correggi la costruzione "I like watching others" se non rilevante.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from a plane or car window. For example, on flights I photograph mountain ranges and patchwork fields because the aerial view is stunning. In the car I sometimes stop at viewpoints to get clearer photos of the countryside.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Risposta: Esprimi chiaramente una preferenza o dì che sei indeciso motivando la scelta. Usa frasi connesse: "I enjoy both, but I prefer... because..." oppure "I can't choose because...". Fornisci esempi specifici (luoghi, attività) e elimina ripetizioni come "maybe maybe". Correggi lessico: "the sea", "mountains", "hiking in the mountains".
Ví dụ: I enjoy both the mountains and the sea, but if I had to choose I would prefer the mountains because I love hiking and the fresh air. For example, I enjoy hiking in the Alps in summer, while I visit Sardinia to relax by the sea.
× I really love looking out from my windows car when I drive in the car.
✓ I really love looking out from my car's window when I drive.
The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and word order. Use 'from' with 'out' and possessive form 'car's window' for clarity. Also remove redundant 'in the car'. Suggestion: 'I really love looking out from my car's window when I drive.'
× For example, when I drive in the highway, I really love looking the landscape, maybe during the sunset time.
✓ For example, when I drive on the highway, I really love looking at the landscape, maybe at sunset.
Use the preposition 'on' with 'highway' and the verb 'look at' for observing something. 'During the sunset time' is unnatural; use 'at sunset'. These changes make the sentence idiomatic and grammatically correct.
× Wow, amazing colors. Red.
✓ Wow, the colors are amazing, especially the reds.
Short fragments are acceptable in speech but grammatically incomplete. Combine into a full sentence and use plural 'reds' when referring to multiple shades. This improves clarity and grammatical form.
× In particularly I remember when I get a plane that's amazing because from that kind of window I can see mountains and countryside in the hare.
✓ In particular, I remember when I was on a plane; that's amazing because from that kind of window I can see mountains and the countryside far below.
Use 'in particular' not 'particularly' for emphasis here. 'Get a plane' is incorrect — use 'was on a plane'. 'Countryside in the hare' seems to be a mishearing; replace with 'the countryside far below'. Adjust verb tense to past 'was' to match 'remember' and make prepositional phrase clear.
× Moreover, I really like when I drive a car watching other.
✓ Moreover, I really like watching other vehicles when I drive.
Original word order is incorrect. Use 'watching' + object and specify 'other vehicles' or 'other cars'. This fixes sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.
× I'm not able to answer really this question because I like mountain but also see as well.
✓ I'm not really able to answer this question because I like the mountains but also the sea.
'Really' should come before 'able' for natural word order. Use plural 'mountains' and include the definite article 'the' with both nouns. 'See' is a homophone error for 'sea'; correct to 'sea'.
× For example, during summer time I like to go to Sardinia, but also I like to go to the mountain hiking because I really love fresh air during the summer time maybe maybe.
✓ For example, during the summer I like to go to Sardinia, but I also like to go hiking in the mountains because I really love the fresh air in summer.
Use 'the summer' or simply 'summer' and avoid repeating phrases. 'Go to the mountain hiking' is incorrect: use 'go hiking in the mountains'. Include 'the' before 'fresh air' and simplify 'during the summer time maybe maybe' to 'in summer'. This yields natural, grammatical sentences.