Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、简洁，并注意语法与词汇搭配。避免重复（如“look outside and and watch”），减少填充词（如“umm”）。可以先给出主题句，然后用1–2个支持细节说明原因或感受，句子间用连接词提高连贯性。注意冠词和单复数（go out by car 而不是 cars），以及更自然的表达（bored 而不是 boring）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually travel by car, and instead of looking at my phone I prefer to watch the passing scenery because it relaxes me and makes the journey more pleasant.

Gợi ý: 避免重复和多余的填充词（如“on Actually no, because on as”）。句子要更紧凑，直接说明不拍照的原因，并用连接词（for example, so）使逻辑清晰。尝试用更地道的词汇表达感受（peaceful 或 calm 代替 sense of quiet）。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don’t. I dislike using my phone in the car, so I prefer to enjoy the view with my own eyes because it feels peaceful and more satisfying.

Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰的理由和自然表达。避免语法错误（例如“I would choose to see as the sea often is my favorite color blue”不通顺）。将观点放在首句，然后用一到两个具体理由支持，使用连词（because, also）增强连贯性。说明具体活动或感觉时更准确（I enjoy swimming or walking on the beach）。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea. I find the blue colour and the sound of the waves very calming, and I enjoy walking on the beach and swimming because it helps me relax without feeling too hot.

× Yes I do, I often go out by cars but it is very uncomfortable and makes me feel boring when I watch my phone on the car.

✓ Yes, I do. I often travel by car, but it is very uncomfortable and makes me feel bored when I use my phone in the car.

此处应使用单数可数名词 car 表示交通工具的一般方式，而不是复数 cars。另：feel boring（使人感到无聊）用法错误，应使用 feel bored（我感到无聊）。同时 watch my phone 改为 use my phone 更自然，on the car 应为 in the car。建议：表示搭乘交通工具通常用 travel by car / go by car；描述感受用 feel + 形容词（bored）而不是使动词。

× So I choose to umm look outside and and watch the scenery through the window which makes me feel pleasant.

✓ So I choose to look outside and watch the scenery through the window, which makes me feel pleasant.

句中有重复词 and and，应去掉多余的 and。另外在 which 引导的非限制性定语从句前加逗号更符合书面语。建议说话时注意避免重复词，句子更简洁。

× On Actually no, because on as I don't like to use my phone on the car because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ Actually no, because I don't like to use my phone in the car since it makes me feel uncomfortable.

原句多余并错误使用介词 on，且 on the car 应为 in the car 表示车内。建议：表示在车辆内部用 in the car。也可用 because / since 引出原因，但不要重复介词。

× I would choose to look outside only by my eyes as it makes me feel satisfied and when looking at the scenery it makes me feel a sense of quiet.

✓ I would choose to look outside with my eyes only, as it makes me feel satisfied, and when I look at the scenery I feel a sense of calm.

原句用 by my eyes 不自然，正确用法是 with my eyes only。此外 it makes me feel a sense of quiet 不地道，通常用 a sense of calm 或 feel calm。also 缺少主语 I 在 when 从句中，改为 when I look 更完整。建议：用 with my eyes, feel calm 或 a sense of calm。

× In my opinion, I would choose to see as the sea often is my favorite color blue, which makes me feel calm and pleasant.

✓ In my opinion, I would choose the sea because the sea is often my favorite color, blue, which makes me feel calm and pleasant.

原句结构混乱，choose to see as the sea 不合逻辑，应为 choose the sea 或 prefer the sea。also sea often is my favorite color blue 语序错误，应为 the sea is often my favorite color, blue。建议重组句子，明确表达喜欢海的原因。

× Also, I like to go to the beach and play with water because I don't like to feel very hot but very cold.

✓ Also, I like to go to the beach and play in the water because I don't like to feel very hot or very cold.

原句使用 because ... but ... 表达矛盾且不恰当；应使用 or 表示不喜欢两种极端（很热或很冷）。另外 play with water 不如 play in the water 自然。建议：用 or 连接两个并列的感受，用 play in the water 描述在海边玩水。