Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で内容は伝わりますが、繰り返しや躊躇語（“uh”, 繰り返しの“I, I”）が多く、文のつながりや語彙の幅を改善するとより自然になります。具体的には、躊躇語を減らし、一つの明確な主文を使い、その後に理由や具体例を述べる練習をしてください。例えば、“I usually look out of the window because I don’t use my smartphone”という主文を先に言い、その後に“the scenery helps me relax and I can notice interesting places”のように詳細を付け加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: I usually look out of the window when I travel because I don’t use my smartphone much. The changing scenery helps me relax, and I often spot interesting places like parks or old buildings that I wouldn’t notice otherwise.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わりますが、文法と語順の修正、語彙の選択（“prefer watching to take photo”は不自然）を行う必要があります。より自然にするには、主文で明確に答え、その後に理由を述べる形にし、適切な動名詞や不定詞を使ってください（例：“I prefer watching rather than taking photos”）。理由を具体的に付け加えるとさらに良くなります。

Ví dụ: I don’t usually take photos of the scenery because I prefer watching it unfold in front of me. I find it more relaxing to enjoy the view directly rather than looking through a camera.

Gợi ý: 答えは明確ですが、繰り返し（“when I when I”）や躊躇語があり、表現が口語的で簡潔さに欠けます。より自然にするには、まず短い主文で好みを示し、次に理由を二つ程度の具体的な詳細で述べ、比較の接続詞を使うと良いです（例：“I prefer the sea because I find the beach relaxing and it’s easier to enjoy than climbing mountains”）。語彙を少し豊かにすると印象が良くなります。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because the beach helps me relax and enjoy the fresh air. In contrast, mountains require a lot of effort to hike, so I usually choose the coast when I want to unwind.

× Yes, I, I usually look outside of uh, train or something because I don't really use my smartphone.

✓ Yes, I usually look out of the train or something because I don't really use my smartphone.

The preposition 'outside of' is less natural in this context; 'look out of' or 'look out' is the correct phrase with vehicles. Also include the article 'the' before 'train' to specify the vehicle. Suggestion: use 'look out of the train' or 'look out the train window.'

× Actually I don't really take photo of outside because I prefer watching to take photo.

✓ Actually I don't really take photos of the outside because I prefer watching to taking photos.

Use the plural 'photos' when speaking generally (quantifier usage) and include the article 'the' before 'outside'. The verb following 'prefer' should be in the -ing form when comparing activities: 'prefer watching to taking.' Also repeat plural 'photos' for consistency. Suggestion: 'I prefer watching to taking photos.'

× I prefer sea because when I when I am at beach I feel very relaxing and very comfortable.

✓ I prefer the sea because when I am at the beach I feel very relaxed and comfortable.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'sea' and 'beach' when referring to them in general contexts. 'Feel very relaxing' is incorrect because 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation; the correct adjective to describe a person’s state is 'relaxed.' Also remove the repeated filler 'when I.' Suggestion: 'I prefer the sea because when I am at the beach I feel very relaxed and comfortable.'

× Uh, mountain is just tired to climb.

✓ Uh, mountains are just tiring to climb.

Use plural 'mountains' or include an article ('the mountain') for correct noun reference. 'Tired to climb' is ungrammatical: to describe the activity as causing fatigue use 'tiring.' Also change verb agreement to plural 'are' if using 'mountains.' Suggestion: 'Mountains are tiring to climb.'