Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で内容は伝わりますが、文法ミスと冗長な表現があり、最後が未完で終わっています。より自然で効果的にするために、主題文を明確にして（Yes, I do. / No, I don't. など）、理由を1〜2文で整理してください。接続詞（because, so, therefore, additionally）を適切に使い、不要な語を削減しましょう。また、文を完全に終わらせ、最大5文以内に収めてください。具体的には「rare timing」は不自然で、「rare opportunity」や「not often available」など正しい語を使うことを勧めます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window because I enjoy taking photos and rarely get a chance to see such scenery. Since I usually travel alone, I also have time to observe and capture interesting scenes, so I try to find the best spots to photograph.

Gợi ý: 答えは意図が明確ですが、文法的な誤り（複数・単数、前置詞、語順）と不自然な表現があります。具体的には“these beautiful scenery”は“this scenery”または“these beautiful scenes”、 “to upload my social network account”は“to upload them to my social media accounts”が正しいです。接続語を使って一つの流れにまとめ、文を簡潔に組み立てましょう。詳細（どんな景色、どんな目的で共有するか）を一つ加えるとより具体的になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing scenery and often upload the best shots to my social media accounts like Instagram and X. I usually take photos when I'm traveling to capture memorable moments and share them with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が分かりますが、語彙と文法の誤りが目立ちます。“Among the sea”は誤用で、“the sea”または“the seaside”が自然です。“interesting sport”は文脈に合わない可能性が高く、“interesting”や“more relaxing”など目的に合わせた語を選びましょう。さらに、理由を論理的に順序立て（第一の理由、第二の理由）して、接続語（because, also, besides）でつなぐと良いです。具体的な例（好きなアクティビティや訪れる場所）を一つ加えてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I find the seaside more relaxing and there are many activities I enjoy, like swimming and walking along the shore. Also, there are nice cafes and shops nearby, so it’s easy to have a relaxed and memorable day.

× Yes, of course because it's so rare timing and I like taking photos so I usually look for the best scenery for capturing it.

✓ Yes, of course, because it's a rare occasion and I like taking photos, so I usually look for the best scenery to capture.

The phrase 'so rare timing' is unidiomatic; use 'a rare occasion' or 'rarely' instead. 'For capturing it' is awkward; use 'to capture' (infinitive) after 'look for the best scenery'. Also add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× In addition, I usually travel alone so I don't have time to talk with friends or someone so I.

✓ In addition, I usually travel alone, so I don't have time to talk with friends or anyone.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so I.' and uses 'someone' awkwardly; 'anyone' is the correct indefinite pronoun here. Also combine clauses with a comma before 'so' and remove the incomplete fragment. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, of course, because I like taking photos and I want to share these beautiful scenery with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course, because I like taking photos and I want to share this beautiful scenery with my friends.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should take 'this' rather than 'these'. Use 'this beautiful scenery' or 'these beautiful scenes' depending on meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× So to upload my social network account like X and Instagram.

✓ So I upload them to my social network accounts like X and Instagram.

The original fragment lacks a finite verb and misuses infinitive 'to upload' without subject. Use present tense 'I upload' to match habitual action and pluralize 'accounts' if referring to multiple platforms. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I usually take photos when I traveling somewhere.

✓ I usually take photos when I travel somewhere.

After 'I' the verb should be base form 'travel' for present tense; 'traveling' is incorrect here. Use simple present to describe habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I prefer Among the sea because it's a more interesting sport for me.

✓ I prefer the sea because it is a more interesting place for me.

'Among the sea' is incorrect; use 'the sea' or 'the seaside'. 'More interesting sport' is wrong because sea is a place, not a sport; use 'place' or 'activity'. Adjust article 'the'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× There are some shops and cafes near the ocean, so it's a chill time and the memorable time for me.

✓ There are some shops and cafes near the ocean, so it's a relaxing and memorable time for me.

'A chill time' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'relaxing'. 'The memorable time' should be 'a memorable time' because it's one of many experiences. Use appropriate articles and adjectives. Grammar problem type ID: 22