Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and accuracy: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid capitalization errors and redundancy, and add one concise supporting detail using a linking word. Also limit to no more than five sentences. Focus on specific examples (e.g. what you notice) and correct small grammatical slips (e.g. 'daydream' lower-case, remove 'something').

Ví dụ: Yes. I often look out the window when I travel by bus or plane because I find the passing scenery calming. For example, I like watching fields and small towns as they go by, which helps me relax and reflect on plans or memories.

Gợi ý: Work on vocabulary accuracy and coherence: use correct words (e.g. 'centre' vs 'scenery', 'photographing' not 'photoring'), avoid contradictory or unclear phrases ('Forbidden light'), and make the sequence logical with linking words. Be specific about how you take photos and one example of a subject or timing. Keep answer concise and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often photograph the scenery from a car or plane to share online. For example, I focus on small towns and coastal streets because they look especially picturesque, and I try to shoot during the golden hour to capture warm light.

Gợi ý: Clarify grammar and sentence structure: start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g. 'take photos' or 'taking photos'), and use a linking word to add one specific reason or example. Keep it within five sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the cool breezes and the sound of waves. For example, I love taking photos of sunrises over the horizon, which creates peaceful scenes that help me relax and improve my photography.

× Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or plane. I enjoy watching the scenery, fields, towns or the sea because it helps me relax and Daydream and something I use the time to reflect on my plans or memories.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or plane. I enjoy watching the scenery, fields, towns or the sea because it helps me relax and daydream; sometimes I use the time to reflect on my plans or memories.

Errors: inconsistent capitalization of 'Daydream' and awkward sentence coordination. 'Daydream' should be lowercase as a verb. The phrase 'and something I use the time to reflect' is ungrammatical; replace with 'sometimes I use the time to reflect' and connect clauses with a semicolon or conjunction. Suggestion: keep verbs in same tense and case, use adverb 'sometimes' for frequency, and join related ideas clearly. Grammar problem type mapping: present tense issue (ID 6).

× Yes, I often take photos of the center outside a car or plane window because I enjoy capturing landscapes to share online.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside a car or plane window because I enjoy capturing landscapes to share online.

Error: wrong noun 'center' likely intended 'scenery'. Also word order: 'photos of the scenery outside a car or plane window' is natural. Suggestion: use correct noun and maintain clear noun phrase. Grammar problem type mapping: incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) because preposition placement and noun choice made phrase awkward.

× I especially like photoring small towns and coastal streets, which often look very picturesque for a moving vehicle, and I try to catch them doing golden hour to Forbidden light.

✓ I especially like photographing small towns and coastal streets, which often look very picturesque from a moving vehicle, and I try to catch them during golden hour or soft, warm light.

Multiple errors: 'photoring' is a misspelling of 'photographing' (verb + -ing form), 'for a moving vehicle' is incorrect preposition and perspective—use 'from a moving vehicle', 'doing golden hour to Forbidden light' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct to 'during golden hour or soft, warm light.' Suggestion: use correct gerund form 'photographing', choose correct prepositions ('from'), and use standard expressions ('during golden hour'). Grammar problem type mapping: sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× I prefer the sea because I enjoy the cool breezes and I love takes photo sunrise over the horizon.

✓ I prefer the sea because I enjoy the cool breezes and I love taking photos of the sunrise over the horizon.

Error: 'love takes photo' mixes verb forms. Should use gerund 'taking' after 'love' and plural 'photos' or 'a photo of the sunrise'. Also add preposition 'of' before 'the sunrise'. Suggestion: after verbs like 'love' use gerund form for the action: 'love taking photos of...'. Grammar problem type mapping: third person singular issue (ID 2).

× I also like the movement of the waves and peaceful atmosphere which helps me relax and take better pictures.

✓ I also like the movement of the waves and the peaceful atmosphere, which help me relax and take better pictures.

Error: missing article 'the' before 'peaceful atmosphere' and subject-verb agreement in the relative clause. The compound subject 'the movement of the waves and the peaceful atmosphere' is plural, so the relative clause verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause. Suggestion: include articles for clarity and ensure verb agrees with compound subject. Grammar problem type mapping: subject-verb agreement errors (ID 27).