Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use “relieving”, “by the window”) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 sentences and finish your thought (the sentence ended abruptly).

Ví dụ: Yes — I often look out of the car window because watching nature is very relaxing for me. For example, when I was a child I used to sit by the window and watch trees and rivers pass by, which made long journeys feel shorter. This still feels like a kind of therapy for me.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use better linking words. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific example and reason. Improve grammar (e.g., “places that are rare or special,” “because it can be dangerous”). Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not usually, because taking photos from a moving vehicle can be dangerous. However, I will take pictures on rare or special trips — for example, I recently visited Alibag and photographed the coastline and sunsets from the car window.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one clear, specific reason and a brief example. Fix grammar (“near water,” “make me feel calm and relaxed,” capitalise proper nouns) and avoid trailing sentences. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase like “for example.”

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because being near water relaxes me and helps me unwind. For example, when I recently visited Alibag I sat on the beach for hours watching the sunset, which made me feel calm and refreshed.

× Yes, I love to see the nature through a car window because it feels so much relieved to me and I feel like it is some kind of therapy to me.

✓ Yes, I love seeing nature through a car window because it makes me feel very relieved and feels like a kind of therapy to me.

Use of prepositions and verb forms: 'see the nature through a car window' is unnatural; remove article 'the' before 'nature' and use 'seeing' for habitual action. 'Feels so much relieved to me' is incorrect: we say 'makes me feel relieved' or 'I feel relieved.' Also 'so much' is informal/awkward here; 'very' is better. Combined construction 'makes me feel very relieved and feels like a kind of therapy to me' clarifies the subject and verb roles.

× In childhood I used to sit at the door side window and enjoy the.

✓ In my childhood I used to sit by the door-side window and enjoy the view.

Missing object and preposition: 'In childhood' is better as 'In my childhood.' 'Door side window' should be hyphenated or written 'door-side window' or 'by the door window.' The sentence ended with 'enjoy the.' which lacks an object; add 'view.' This fixes sentence completeness and noun phrase structure.

× Not always because it is dangerous sometimes, but when I travel for some location which is very rare and specific, like beaches and mountains, I love to take pictures through the window.

✓ Not always, because it is sometimes dangerous, but when I travel to a place that is rare or special, like a beach or a mountain, I love to take pictures through the window.

Word order and verb forms: 'it is dangerous sometimes' is better as 'it is sometimes dangerous.' 'Travel for some location' is incorrect preposition/use; use 'travel to a place.' 'Which is very rare and specific' is awkward; 'that is rare or special' is clearer. Use singular/plural consistency: 'beaches and mountains' as examples should be 'a beach or a mountain' when speaking generically.

× And recently I went on a trip to Alibag.

✓ Recently, I went on a trip to Alibag.

Minor article/punctuation: 'And recently' at sentence start is informal; remove 'And' and add comma after 'Recently.' Grammar issue is stylistic rather than major; corrected for natural phrasing.

× I prefer sea because I enjoy being near to water.

✓ I prefer the sea because I enjoy being near water.

Preposition and article: Use 'the sea' when comparing preferences. Do not use 'near to' in this context; 'near water' or 'close to water' is correct. This fixes article usage and preposition choice.

× Also I love beaches because they makes me feel so calm and relieved.

✓ Also, I love beaches because they make me feel calm and relieved.

Subject-verb agreement and adverb use: 'they makes' is incorrect; the plural subject 'they' requires 'make.' 'So calm and relieved' is acceptable but 'calm and relieved' is more natural; remove 'so' for neutral tone.

× Recently I went to alibag.

✓ Recently, I went to Alibag.

Proper noun capitalization: 'Alibag' is a place name and must be capitalized. Also add a comma after 'Recently' for natural rhythm. This corrects the capitalization error (treated here as an article/capitalization issue).

× I sat there for hours looking at the sunset and it.

✓ I sat there for hours looking at the sunset.

Redundant and incomplete phrase: Ending with 'and it' is incomplete; remove 'and it.' The corrected sentence is complete and grammatically correct.