Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do), then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct verb forms and simple connectors (because, so, and). Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences. Focus on clarity: say why you look (enjoy scenery, relax, get ideas) and give one concrete example. Avoid repetition and incorrect prepositions/articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing new landscapes. For example, I like watching mountains and fields pass by because it helps me relax and think. Sometimes I also notice interesting buildings or colours that inspire my photography.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct word order. Use one clear reason and a short example. Avoid repeating words and incorrect pronouns. Use linking words like because or so. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car because I like to share them on social media. For instance, I usually post pictures of sunsets or interesting buildings so my friends can see where I have been.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, especially, for example). Correct common errors ("the sea" not "them see", "calms me" not "calming me"). Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves calms me. For example, I enjoy playing with my children on the beach and doing activities like swimming and surfing, which relaxes our whole family.

× Yes, I'm looking that again out of the window when I'm travelling by the bus or car in order to looking gear to them landscape that are beautiful that landscape and how might get create this scenery.

✓ Yes, I always look out of the window when I'm travelling by bus or car to see the beautiful landscape and how it is formed.

The original sentence has incorrect present continuous use and word order. 'I'm looking that again' is ungrammatical; use simple present 'I always look' for habitual actions. 'Travelling by the bus or car' should be 'travelling by bus or car' (remove definite article 'the'). 'In order to looking gear to them landscape' misuses 'to' plus -ing; use infinitive 'to see'. 'Them landscape that are beautiful' has wrong pronoun and agreement; use 'the beautiful landscape' or 'beautiful landscapes' with correct verb 'is formed' for description. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, correct prepositions, and proper noun phrases.

× And this is me I I help this help me to make medication and become.

✓ This helps me to relax and become calm.

The sentence uses incorrect words and forms: 'I I help this help me to make medication' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is that looking at scenery helps relaxation. Use 'helps me to relax' or 'helps me relax'. 'Become' needs an adjective 'calm'. Suggestion: use correct verbs and complements (relax, become calm).

× Of course, I take always take the photo and they're capturing the the scenery when I'm traveling by them a car because I enjoy them sharing this photo later with my social media with my friends or maybe Harry Harry see.

✓ Of course, I always take photos and capture the scenery when I'm travelling by car because I enjoy sharing the photos later on social media with my friends.

Adverb placement: 'I take always take' is wrong; adverb 'always' should come before main verb: 'I always take'. Remove redundant 'take' and 'the the'. 'They're capturing' is wrong tense/structure; use simple present 'capture' for habitual action. 'Travelling by them a car' has wrong determiner; use 'by car'. 'I enjoy them sharing' incorrect pronoun; use gerund 'sharing'. Remove unnecessary repetition 'Harry Harry see' which is unclear. Suggestion: place adverbs before main verbs, use simple present for habits, and use gerunds after 'enjoy'.

× I prefer them see because them because of the waters.

✓ I prefer the sea because of the water.

'Them see' uses wrong pronoun; use 'the sea' or 'the ocean'. 'Them because of the waters' mixes pronouns and plural noun incorrectly; 'water' is uncountable so use singular 'water' or 'the water'. Suggestion: use correct determiners ('the') and treat uncountable nouns properly.

× It makes me sense calm, especially the sound of waves.

✓ It makes me feel calm, especially the sound of the waves.

Use 'feel' not 'sense' for emotions: 'makes me feel calm'. Add 'the' before 'waves' to refer to specific sounds of waves. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for emotions and include articles where needed.

× It's incredibly calming me and I love playing with my playing with my children and make many activities like surfing.

✓ It's incredibly calming, and I love playing with my children and doing many activities like surfing.

'Calming me' is incorrect word order; use 'It's incredibly calming' or 'It calms me.' 'Playing with my playing with my children' repeats phrase; remove repetition. After 'love' use gerund 'playing' and for other activities use 'doing many activities'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct verb forms after 'love' and proper clause order.