Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 全体として意図は伝わりますが、冗長な表現や曖昧なフレーズがあり、文の構造も不自然です。まず冒頭で直接的に答え（肯定/否定）を述べ、その後に1〜2文で具体例や理由を述べると良いです。接続詞（because, so, therefore, alsoなど）を適切に使い、重複や不要なフレーズ（"I think so" や "in moving" のような曖昧表現）を省いて明確に表現しましょう。さらに語彙を少し広げて（e.g. scenery → landscape, local culture, countryside）具体性を加えると良いです。練習ポイント：①冒頭のトピック文を明確にする。②接続語で理由をつなぐ。③具体例を一つ加える。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the local landscape. For example, I like seeing traditional houses and farmland along the route, which makes the journey feel like part of the trip rather than just a means of transportation.

Gợi ý: 答えはある程度意図がわかりますが、多くの繰り返し、文法ミス、語順の乱れがあり内容が分かりにくくなっています。まず短く一文で答え（Yes/No と理由）を示し、次に1つ具体的な例（どんな景色を撮るか）を付け加えてください。不要な繰り返し（"outside of outside"、"I enjoy the because I enjoy"）を避け、語彙は正確に使いましょう（coastal lows → coastal cliffs/coastlines, current → car）。接続語（for example, because, especially）を使って論理的につなげる練習が必要です。練習ポイント：①冗長表現を削る。②具体的な被写体を1つ挙げる。③正しい単語を使う。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I like capturing interesting views. For example, I usually photograph coastlines and traditional buildings, and sometimes I try to capture local people working in fields to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: この回答は意味が不明瞭で、繰り返しと誤った語句（"fatty goose"）のため意図が伝わっていません。まず明確に好みを述べ、その理由を簡潔に1〜2文で説明しましょう。理由は現実的で分かりやすいもの（e.g. I prefer the sea because I like relaxing on the beach; I dislike strenuous hiking）を使い、不要な繰り返しを避けてください。練習ポイント：①直接的なトピック文（I prefer...）を使う。②理由は具体的かつ自然な語彙で述べる（tiring → strenuous, not fond of hiking）。③文を完結させる。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy relaxing on beaches and swimming. I’m not a fan of strenuous hikes, so coastal trips suit me better since they’re more relaxing and require less physical effort.

× Yeah, I usually look at the window, at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I think so.

✓ Yeah, I usually look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I think it's part of the trip.

You should use the correct preposition 'out of' or 'out' with 'look' when referring to looking through a window. Also add 'it's part of the trip' to complete the idea and make the sentence natural. Suggestion: 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' and include a clear clause like 'because I think it's part of the trip.'

× I think the nature and culture I can see from the bus is included in the trip, so I can enjoy the nature in moving.

✓ I think the nature and culture I can see from the bus are part of the trip, so I can enjoy the scenery while traveling.

Use plural verb agreement with 'nature and culture' (they are) and correct preposition and phrasing: 'part of the trip' and 'while traveling' (not 'in moving'). Also 'enjoy the scenery' is more natural than 'enjoy the nature.'

× Yeah, I usually take photos of the scenery outside of outside the car window 'cause I enjoy the because I enjoy the scenery, especially the mountains like coastal lows and the I feel like the part of the trip and the watching local life and traditional buildings from the current.

✓ Yeah, I usually take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I enjoy it, especially mountains and coastal views. I feel it's part of the trip to watch local life and traditional buildings from the car.

Remove duplicated 'outside of outside' and use 'outside the car window.' Replace 'the because I enjoy the scenery' with concise phrasing. 'Coastal lows' is unclear; use 'coastal views.' Use 'from the car' instead of 'from the current.' Simplify sentence structure for clarity and correct prepositions ('from the car').

× Well, I prefer the sea to the mountain because I don't I don't like fatty goose.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea to the mountains because I don't like being cold and wet.

'Mountain' should be plural when comparing generally: 'the mountains' (singular would refer to a specific mountain). The original 'fatty goose' is likely an error; provide a plausible corrected meaning (e.g. 'being cold and wet') or, if student meant 'foggy' or 'steep climbs', ask for clarification. Here, change to a coherent reason and correct plurality.

× I don't like being fatty goose. So So if I go to the mountains, we usually have to climb, climb them and.

✓ I don't like climbing steep slopes, so if I go to the mountains, we usually have to climb them, which I find tiring.

'Being fatty goose' is not a valid English phrase; this is a sentence structure and word choice error. Clarify intended meaning (likely dislike of strenuous climbing). Complete the sentence and remove repetition. Use a clear clause 'which I find tiring' to finish the thought.