Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms and a clear topic sentence, then give one concise supporting detail. Avoid repetition of words like “always.” Use a linking word if you add more information. For example, say “Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy seeing the scenery. For instance, I like watching city streets pass by, which helps me relax.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy seeing the scenery. For example, I like watching changing buildings and parks, which helps me relax during the journey.

Gợi ý: Correct word choice and reduce errors: replace incorrect words (e.g., “astonished view”, “normal fuel”) with appropriate vocabulary, fix article use, and use a linking word for contrast. Keep it to two short sentences: a topic sentence and a brief condition/example. For instance, say “I only take photos when the view is spectacular; otherwise I just enjoy it.”

Ví dụ: It depends — I only take photos when the view is spectacular, such as fresh snow covering a landscape. If the scenery is ordinary, I prefer to simply look and enjoy it.

Gợi ý: This answer has serious issues: it does not directly state a preference, contains multiple grammar errors, and a frightening word mistake (“die” instead of “dive”). First, clearly state your preference (mountains or sea). Then give one or two specific reasons using correct verbs and tenses. Avoid pauses and incorrect words. For example: “I prefer the sea because I enjoy diving; I started learning last year and it feels exciting.”

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy diving. I started lessons last year, and exploring underwater life makes me feel excited and calm.

× Yes, I always look out the window when I taking a bus because I always enjoy the view when I on the road.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window when I take a bus because I always enjoy the view when I am on the road.

Two errors: 'when I taking a bus' uses incorrect verb form; after 'when' use base form with subject and auxiliary if needed: 'when I take a bus'. Second, 'when I on the road' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous/state: use 'when I am on the road'. Suggestion: use 'take' for habitual actions and include 'am' before 'on the road'.

× It depends, when there is beautiful astonished view like a amazing snow I will take some pictures but if there's only normal fuel I would just look at it.

✓ It depends. When there is a beautiful, astonishing view like amazing snowfall I will take some pictures, but if there is only a plain landscape I would just look at it.

Multiple issues matched to allowed list: article use and adjective choice. 'beautiful astonished view' is incorrect adjective form; use 'a beautiful, astonishing view' ('astonishing' describes the view). 'a amazing snow' needs article agreement: 'an amazing snowfall' or 'an amazing snow scene'; 'snowfall' is more natural. 'normal fuel' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'plain landscape' or 'nothing special'. Also punctuation: separate clauses with a period or comma and use 'there is' instead of contraction for clarity. Suggestion: use correct adjectives ('astonishing'), correct article 'a' vs 'an', and choose appropriate nouns ('snowfall', 'landscape').

× I think I am a safe person since I like to dive. I Start learning to go by diving last year and it always make me feel exciting when I, uh, die.

✓ I think I am a safe person since I like to dive. I started learning to dive last year and it always makes me feel excited when I dive.

Three errors: 'Start' should be past tense 'started' because training began last year (Past tense issue). 'learning to go by diving' is ungrammatical; use 'learning to dive' (verb + -ing simplification). 'it always make me feel exciting' uses incorrect verb agreement and adjective/adverb: subject-verb agreement requires 'makes' and 'feel excited' (adjective), not 'exciting' (which describes something that causes excitement). Finally 'die' is a wrong word; likely meant 'dive' (spelling error). Suggestion: use past tense 'started', correct verb phrase 'learn to dive' or 'started learning to dive', use 'makes me feel excited', and check spelling 'dive' vs 'die'.