Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 用更自然、语法正确的句子表达观点与原因，控制在不超过5句内，并加入连词使话语更连贯。注意动词形式和介词用法（例如“when I travel”，“keep away from”，“relax and meditate”，“find interesting architecture”）。可以简化重复表达，提供更具体的细节以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel because it helps me put my phone aside and relax. For example, on long bus trips I enjoy watching changing landscapes, like rice fields or old townhouses. This quiet time sometimes feels like a short meditation and makes the journey more pleasant.

Gợi ý: 注意语法和词序（例如“like to take”，“images that include”），并用一至两句具体说明拍照的原因或例子来增强内容连贯性。避免冗余并使用恰当的词汇如“landforms, landscapes, landmarks”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to take photos from the car window, especially in new places. For instance, I often photograph unusual landforms or historic buildings and later post a few favourites on social media to show my friends what I’ve seen.

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅并修正语法（例如“I usually like to go to the sea to swim or sunbathe in summer”），用连词连接因果或条件，提供一两个具体细节或对比来支持偏好，如举例说明哪种活动适合哪种情绪或季节。保持句子不超过5句。

Ví dụ: I like both, as it depends on my mood and the season. In summer I usually prefer the sea for swimming or sunbathing, while in autumn I enjoy hiking in the mountains for the cooler weather and colourful foliage.

× Yes, I often look out the window when I traveling.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window when I am traveling.

句中缺少be动词，表达进行时应使用“am/are/is + 动词ing”。建议把“when I traveling”改为“when I am traveling”。

× It's a good way to keep away of my smartphone and have a short time relax and meditation.

✓ It's a good way to keep away from my smartphone and have a short time to relax and meditate.

中文解释：短语应使用“keep away from”表示“远离”，不能说“keep away of”。此外，“have a short time relax and meditation”结构不正确，动词不定式和动名词用法需调整；应为“have a short time to relax and meditate”或“have a short relaxation and meditation”。建议使用不定式表达目的或使用名词形式。

× And I also like find some interesting things like natural landscapes and interesting architectures.

✓ And I also like to find some interesting things like natural landscapes and interesting architecture.

中文解释：“like”后面可接动词不定式或动名词，但在此更自然用不定式“to find”。另外“architectures”作复数不常用，应用不可数名词“architecture”或改为“architectural structures”。建议改为“like to find ... and interesting architecture”。

× Yes, I like take photos of the scenery outside, especially when I go somewhere new.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside, especially when I go somewhere new.

中文解释：动词“like”后面通常接不定式“to take”或动名词“taking”；这里用“to take”更符合口语书面表达。建议改为“like to take”或“like taking”。

× I love capturing images that including some interesting landforms, natural scenery and distinctive buildings and share with my friends on social media.

✓ I love capturing images that include some interesting landforms, natural scenery and distinctive buildings and sharing them with my friends on social media.

中文解释：关系从句中谓语应为“include”，不能用现在分词“including”直接做谓语；并列结构中的动词形式需一致，前面用“capturing”，后面应使用动名词“sharing”，并补上宾语“them”。建议改为上述句子。

× I like both of them.

✓ I like both.

中文解释：常见表达“like both”即可，若加“of them”虽非完全错误但在此可省略更自然。若保留“of them”应有明确指代对象。建议根据上下文使用“I like both.”

× Usually I like go to the sea to swimming or sunbathing on summer and go hiking into the mountains at autumn.

✓ Usually I like to go to the sea to swim or sunbathe in summer and go hiking in the mountains in autumn.

中文解释：动词形式需改为不定式“to go”并与动词“swim/sunbathe”保持原形；介词应为“in summer/in autumn”表示季节，而不是“on/at”。“go hiking in the mountains”使用“in”更自然，而不是“into”。建议按以上修改。

× They all have their own charm.

✓ They all have their own charm.

中文解释：该句无语法错误，主谓一致正确，因此无需修改。