Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は概ね適切ですが、いくつか改善点があります。まず、文法や語彙の誤り（例："your scenic views"は不自然）を直し、文を自然に終わらせる必要があります。次に、話を具体化するために一つか二つの具体例（どんな風景が好きか、何を感じるか）を加え、文同士をつなぐ接続語（for example, such as, which）を使って流れをよくしてください。文の長さは最大5文に収め、冗長さを避けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel, especially to new places. I enjoy seeing landscapes such as mountains and coastlines, because they help me understand the area better. For example, when I see terraced fields or fishing villages, I can tell whether the region is rural or coastal. This makes the journey more enjoyable and informative.

Gợi ý: 回答は明確で論理的ですが、より自然で流暢に聞こえるように接続詞の使い方と語順を微調整すると良いです。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると点が上がります（例えば、窓ガラスの反射や安全面など）。最後に一文で代替行動（写真を撮らないとき何をするか）を加えると内容が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car because it's hard to get a clear shot due to motion blur and reflections on the window. Besides, I find it safer and more relaxing to just watch the scenery. Instead, I sometimes ask the driver to stop briefly at a viewpoint if I really want to take pictures.

Gợi ý: 回答は不十分で断片的です。まず短いトピックセンテンスで好みを明確に述べ、その後に接続詞で理由や具体例を一つか二つ示してください。現在の文は句が切れており意味が伝わりにくいので、完全な文で理由（例：海の開放感、景色の多様性、特定の思い出）や具体的な場面（朝や夕方の景色）を説明してください。語彙も“scenic”ではなく“scenery”や“views”を使い、文法を整えましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the open views and the sound of waves, which I find very relaxing. For example, in Tianjin I enjoy watching the sunrise over the coastline, and at sunset the sky often turns pink and orange, creating beautiful views that stay in my memory.

× I like to admire your scenic views like mountains or the coastline, and it helps me get a sense of.

✓ I like to admire scenic views like mountains or the coastline, and it helps me get a sense of the place.

The student incorrectly used 'your' which is not appropriate when talking about general scenery; use no possessive pronoun. The sentence also ends incomplete with 'get a sense of' which needs an object such as 'the place' or 'the area'. Suggest removing 'your' and adding a noun to complete the phrase: 'get a sense of the place'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× No, I usually don't. The car is always moving, therefore it's difficult to get a clear picture and I prefer to enjoy the view instead.

✓ No, I usually don't. The car is always moving, so it's difficult to get a clear picture and I prefer to enjoy the view instead.

This sentence is mostly correct grammatically but using 'therefore' in spoken context can sound formal or cause punctuation issues; replacing with 'so' makes the cause-effect connection clearer in natural speech. Also ensure tense consistency: present simple 'is' and 'prefer' are correct for habitual actions. Suggest using 'so' for smoother spoken English. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I prefer the sea because I can see the scenic. Tianjin. At the time. Morning sunset.

✓ I prefer the sea because I can see the scenery in Tianjin at sunrise or sunset.

The original is fragmented and uses 'scenic' incorrectly as a noun; the correct noun is 'scenery'. The fragments 'Tianjin. At the time. Morning sunset.' should be combined into a single coherent clause indicating time and place, e.g. 'in Tianjin at sunrise or sunset'. Suggest replace 'scenic' with 'scenery' and combine fragments into one clear sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 26