Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần tránh tiếng ậm ờ và lặp từ quá nhiều; trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Ví dụ nên nêu lý do rõ ràng (thích ngắm cảnh, thư giãn) và mô tả cụ thể (loại cảnh bạn thấy). Ngoài ra nên dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, and). Hạn chế phát biểu dài dòng và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy seeing the countryside and old houses. For example, I like watching green fields and small villages pass by, which helps me relax. I also sometimes try to spot interesting buildings or people while I travel.

Gợi ý: Cần mở rộng câu trả lời bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và lý do cụ thể. Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp (photograph, scenery, view) và liên từ để nối ý (because, so). Thêm một ví dụ ngắn sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Giữ tối đa 3 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember beautiful views. For instance, I sometimes photograph sunsets or interesting landscapes and later share them with friends. It makes the journey more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer the mountains/the sea) rồi giải thích rõ ràng. Tránh lỗi phát âm khiến câu không hiểu được. Nên cung cấp lý do cụ thể (không khí trong lành, cơ hội chụp ảnh, hoạt động ngoài trời) và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ (because, so, for example) để mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I can take lots of photos and enjoy the fresh air. For example, when I go hiking I can capture scenic views and feel relaxed away from the city.

× I usually look out the, uh, the windows when traveling by bus.

✓ I usually look out the window when traveling by bus.

Use the singular 'the window' or plural 'the windows' consistently. In this context, 'look out the window' is the common expression for focusing on the view; repeating 'the' is redundant. Remove the extra article and choose singular for idiomatic phrasing.

× That's because I want to see, uh, uh, I, I want to see the beautiful scenery, uh, maybe, uh, uh, away from, uh, party pills, uh, beautiful house.

✓ That's because I want to see the beautiful scenery, maybe houses and distant views.

The original phrase 'away from party pills' is unclear and likely incorrect preposition and word choice. Replace with clear nouns like 'houses' or 'distant views' and remove unnecessary 'away from'. Use 'see' + object directly.

× I like to take photo of the scenery outside the car windows maybe it's a very beautiful.

✓ I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window; maybe it's very beautiful.

Use the plural 'photos' when referring to multiple pictures. Also use singular 'window' for the common expression 'outside the car window.' Add punctuation to connect clauses and remove the extra article 'a' before 'very beautiful.'

× I enjoy it.

✓ I enjoy doing that.

While 'I enjoy it' is not grammatically wrong, 'I enjoy doing that' clarifies the action (taking photos) and fits better after the previous sentence. It improves coherence.

× I really reported my son because in the mountain I can text a lot of photo, uh, there I can also enjoy fresh air.

✓ I really prefer the mountains because in the mountains I can take a lot of photos, and I can also enjoy the fresh air there.

'Reported my son' is incorrect; likely intended 'prefer.' Use 'prefer' + 'the mountains.' Use plural 'mountains' and plural 'photos.' Use 'take' for making photos, not 'text.' Place 'there' appropriately. Improve word choice and pronouns for clarity.