Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 内容较直接，表达清楚但存在重复、语法和连贯问题。建议：1) 避免重复词汇和语句（如“I I”）；2) 改善句子连接，使用简单连词如“so”、“and”、“because”使结构更自然；3) 注意冠词和介词用法（去bus前应为“by bus”或“on a bus”）；4) 控制答案长度，最多五句，第一句作主题句，随后一两句给出具体细节或例子。

Ví dụ: I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it is the best way to enjoy the scenery. I often listen to music at the same time, which makes the journey more relaxing. For example, when I went to Qingdao last year, I watched the beautiful coastline from the bus and felt very calm.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但存在语法错误、重复和不自然表达。建议：1) 修正语法（例如不要说“when I standing on the car”，应为“when I’m standing outside the car”或“when I stop the car”）；2) 删除重复词汇（如“to to”、“there is a there is”）；3) 增加具体细节说明为何稳定（比如使用三脚架或站在安全位置）并用连接词使逻辑清晰；4) 保持简短，不超过五句。

Ví dụ: No, I don't often take photos from a moving car. I prefer taking pictures when I stop and get out of the car because it's easier to get a steady shot and find a good angle. For instance, I usually step out at scenic viewpoints to take clearer photos.

Gợi ý: 答案表达了偏好和理由，但有重复、数词和冠词错误以及冗长。建议：1) 避免重复（如“families and with my family”）；2) 改正名词复数和冠词（“famous mountain”应为“famous mountains”）；3) 用一两句具体细节支持理由（举例说明常去的山或一次徒步经历）；4) 使用连接词如“so”或“because”使回答更连贯，并控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because there are many famous mountains near my hometown and I often go hiking with my family and friends. I enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views, and hiking is a great way to exercise and relax. For example, last summer we climbed a nearby peak and had a wonderful picnic at the top.

× I usually look out the window when I travel by a bus or a car because I think it is the best way to enjoy the scenery. I also like to listen to music at the same time be it makes the journey more relaxing.

✓ I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or by car because I think it is the best way to enjoy the scenery. I also like to listen to music at the same time because it makes the journey more relaxing.

句中“by a bus or a car”使用不当，交通工具前通常不加不定冠词，应说“by bus”或“by car”。此外“be it makes”是错误的连接词使用，正确应为“because it makes”表示原因。建议记住常见交通方式前的固定搭配（by bus, by car），以及用because引出原因。

× For example, I I went to Qingdao City last year and I I I watched the beautiful coastline by a bus.

✓ For example, I went to Qingdao City last year and I watched the beautiful coastline from a bus.

句子中有重复的“I I I”，属口语填充词，应删除。使用“by a bus”不合适，表示在车上看到风景应用“from a bus”。动词时态过去式使用正确，但介词需改为from。建议删除多余词并使用正确介词。

× No, I don't often take photos outside the car window. I prefer taking photos when I standing on the car because it is easier to to get a stable shot and the then the view will look better since there is a there is a proper angle.

✓ No, I don't often take photos through the car window. I prefer taking photos when I am standing on the car because it is easier to get a stable shot and the view will look better since there is a proper angle.

“outside the car window”表达不准确，通常说“through the car window”。短语“when I standing on the car”缺少系动词，应为“when I am standing”。句中有双重“to to”和重复“the then the”与“there is a there is”，应删除多余词。建议注意主语与动词的完整搭配（be动词＋现在分词）并检查重复错误。

× I prefer taking photos when I am standing on the car because it is easier to get a stable shot and the view will look better since there is a proper angle.

✓ I prefer taking photos when I am standing in the car because it is easier to get a stable shot and the view will look better since there is a proper angle.

“standing on the car”通常意思是站在车顶或车外，若指在车内应使用“in the car”。根据上下文应改为“in”。建议区分“on the bus/car”（上车时常用on用于公共交通）与“in the car”（私家车内部）。

× Of course, I prefer mountains because there are lots of famous mountain near my hometown and I usually go hiking with my families and with my family and friends in our spare time.

✓ Of course, I prefer the mountains because there are lots of famous mountains near my hometown and I usually go hiking with my family and friends in our spare time.

句中“famous mountain”应为复数“famous mountains”。“my families”不合逻辑，正确应为单数“my family”。另外在表达对山的一般偏好时，常说“prefer the mountains”。建议注意名词单复数和集合名词family的用法。

× I enjoy the beautiful scenery and the fresh air in this in the mountains and hiking is really a good way to exercise.

✓ I enjoy the beautiful scenery and the fresh air in the mountains, and hiking is really a good way to exercise.

原句中出现多余的“this in the mountains”和语序重复，应删去多余词并用逗号连接并列句。建议注意句子中重复短语并保持简洁。