Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler sounds (uh, I, I). Pay attention to verb forms and singular/plural nouns (e.g., 'people', 'traveling').

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching busy streets and commuters because it helps me notice daily routines and city life. Also, sometimes I try to observe interesting buildings or shops to remember places I might visit later.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then provide a specific reason and an example. Remove repetition and correct vocabulary (use 'scenery' or 'city life', not 'scenario' or 'city lies'). Keep to two or three supporting sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because it captures interesting moments of city life. For example, I sometimes photograph crowded streets or colourful shop fronts to remember the atmosphere of a place.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear preference sentence followed by two coherent, specific reasons linked logically. Use correct adjective forms (e.g., 'relaxed' → 'relaxing'), and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'also'.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because being by the sea is very relaxing and peaceful. Also, the sound of the waves and the fresh air help me clear my mind and reduce stress, so I always feel refreshed after a visit.

× Yes, I look up the I look out the window at the scene when, whenever I traveling by bus or car, uh, I, I love to see the busy streets crowd, uh, busy peoples at their everyday. Everyday is hustling their everyday is everybody is hustling their lives.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery whenever I travel by bus or car. I love to see the busy streets and the crowds; people are hustling about their everyday lives.

Multiple errors: 'traveling' should be base form 'travel' after 'whenever I' (present simple) — issue: verb in the present participle form. 'Scene' is wrong collocation; use 'scenery'. 'Busy streets crowd' is ungrammatical; use 'busy streets and the crowds' and 'peoples' is incorrect plural of 'people'. Repetition and punctuation were fixed. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, use correct noun collocations and plural 'people'.

× Yeah, definitely. I whenever I get a chance to take photos of the scenario, I have to say the car window, I definitely take the photos. I took the photos about city lies, busy streets and and.

✓ Yes, definitely. Whenever I get a chance to take photos of the scenery through the car window, I always take them. I have taken photos of city lights and busy streets.

Problems include incorrect noun 'scenario' instead of 'scenery' and awkward tense usage. 'I took the photos about city lies' is wrong: 'city lights' needed; 'took' can be past but for experience use present perfect 'have taken' — this relates to past participle usage. Also 'take the photos' pronoun should be 'them'. Suggestion: use 'through the car window', correct nouns and use present perfect for life experiences or simple past if specific time is given.

× I prefer sea over the mountains because the sea gives me so relaxed, so coming and peaceful and be being near by the sea. It also helps. It also helps to keep our mind and keep our mind refresh, keep our keep our soul.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because the sea makes me feel relaxed, calm, and peaceful. Being near the sea helps to refresh the mind and soothe the soul.

'Prefer sea over' needs articles and correct preposition: 'prefer the sea to the mountains' — classified under present tense issue because verb forms and state descriptions require simple present: 'gives me so relaxed' is incorrect; use 'makes me feel relaxed'. 'so coming' is wrong word; intended 'calm'. 'be being' is wrong form. Repetition 'keep our mind' and 'keep our' fixed. Suggestion: use 'makes me feel' for emotional states, correct adjectives, and simplify repeated phrases.