Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar errors (e.g. article use, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus because the views are beautiful. For example, mountain ranges and the sea help me relax, and I usually enjoy watching them especially during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and clearer linking. Begin with a direct answer, explain why briefly, and avoid hesitation or repetition. Use correct tense (present simple for habitual actions) and combine related ideas into one or two sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos through the window because they serve as souvenirs, and afterwards I usually post the best shots on social media.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference first, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and awkward phrasing (e.g. 'I prepare to see') and avoid vague statements. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it calms me and reminds me of family vacations. For instance, listening to the waves helps me relax and brings back happy memories from trips with my relatives.

× Yes, I usually look at the window, the scenery when travelling by car, bus as it the view is beautiful, especially when you see mountains or sea as there are very relaxing and usually.

✓ Yes, I usually look out of the window at the scenery when travelling by car or bus because the view is beautiful, especially when you see the mountains or the sea, which are very relaxing.

Errors: incorrect or missing articles ('the window' should be 'out of the window' or 'the window' with correct preposition), wrong conjunctions and punctuation, and unnecessary words. Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' to indicate looking outside; use 'car or bus' not 'car, bus'; use 'because' to give reason; include 'the' before 'mountains' and 'sea' when referring to specific geographic features; replace 'as there are very relaxing and usually' with a relative clause 'which are very relaxing' and remove 'usually'. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, place articles before countable/named nouns, and use conjunctions correctly to link clauses.

× Absolutely. I took photos when I opened the window because it's it's like a souvenir. And after that I will post that in social media.

✓ Absolutely. I take photos when I open the window because they feel like souvenirs. After that, I post them on social media.

Errors: tense inconsistency and wrong pronouns. The question asks about habitual action, so use present simple ('I take', 'I open') not past ('I took'). 'It's it's like a souvenir' is ungrammatical and uses singular 'it' instead of plural 'they' for photos; 'souvenir' better plural 'souvenirs' or 'like a souvenir' adjusted to 'feel like souvenirs'. 'Will post' implies future; use present simple 'post' for habitual action. Use 'on social media' as correct preposition. Suggestion: match tense to habitual context, use correct pronouns for plural nouns, and use 'on' for platforms.

× I prepare to see because it calms my nerves and it keeps me relaxing and going to the sea reminds me of family vacation.

✓ I prefer the sea because it calms my nerves and helps me relax, and going to the sea reminds me of family vacations.

Errors: wrong verb choice 'prepare to see' (makes no sense here) and awkward verb forms ('keeps me relaxing'). Use 'prefer' to answer preference question. Use present simple for general truths ('calms', 'reminds'). Use 'help someone relax' rather than 'keeps me relaxing'. 'Family vacation' should be plural 'family vacations' or preceded by 'a' if singular. Suggestion: choose verbs that express preference and effect clearly, use idiomatic collocations like 'helps me relax', and ensure noun number matches context.