Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子应更自然、语法更准确并避免多余重复。注意动词形式和固定搭配（例如 “look out of the window” 或 “look at the scenery”），并把情感描述用一个清晰的主题句表达，再用1–2个支持细节。避免不正确词形（如 “low looking”、“sweep past” 的使用问题）和主谓一致错误（“I feels”）。可以用连接词（e.g. because, so）让表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the landscape go by. It often feels like watching a movie, and I especially like seeing changing scenes such as fields and small towns.

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有些重复。可以用更丰富的词汇和具体细节说明什么时候或为什么拍照，例如拍摄的对象、使用的设备或分享方式。用一两个连词把句子连接起来，避免机械重复同一句话。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially during sunrise or when passing interesting landscapes. I usually use my phone to capture the views so I can share them with friends or keep them as travel memories.

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然的表达和更准确的语法。注意动词形式（如 “climb mountains” 或 “climbing”）和名词复数（“streams”）。应先给出直接答案，然后用一到两句具体原因支持，使用连接词如 “because” 或 “so”。避免重复相同观点，补充具体细节（例如徒步、空气、景色）。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and being surrounded by trees and streams. The fresh air and peaceful trails make hiking there very relaxing, and I like the sense of accomplishment when I reach the top.

× Yes I do. I like low looking the scenery sweep past to the window.

✓ Yes, I do. I like looking at the scenery sweep past the window.

原句中“low looking”是不正确的表达，且动词“look”后缺少介词“at”。另外“sweep past to the window”中的“to”多余，正确应为“sweep past the window”。建议：使用动词+ing 表示喜欢某动作，常用结构是 “like + verb-ing”，并注意固定搭配“look at”。

× I feels like I'm watching a movie and the scenery is beautiful.

✓ I feel like I'm watching a movie, and the scenery is beautiful.

动词与主语不一致：主语“I”应接动词“feel”，而不是“feels”。建议：第一人称单数现在时用“I + base verb”。

× Yes, of course. I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car windows.

✓ Yes, of course. I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

此处指的是车窗这一位置的景色，作为总体概念时常用单数“car window”。使用复数“windows”会引起歧义。建议：描述车窗外的风景时可用“the car window”或更一般的“car windows”，但上下文中更自然用单数。

× I think the scenery outside of the car window is worth recording.

✓ I think the scenery outside the car window is worth recording.

短语“outside of”在英式英语中常被认为多余，直接用“outside”即可更简洁自然。建议：使用“outside the car window”。

× I think I prefer the mountains because I like climb a mountain.

✓ I think I prefer the mountains because I like climbing mountains.

动词“like”后应接动名词“climbing”，而不是不定式省略“to”。另外“a mountain”改为复数“mountains”与前文“the mountains”保持一致。建议：用“like + -ing”或“不定式to + 动词”，但要保持形式一致。

× I like trees and stream it.

✓ I like the trees and streams there.

原句中“stream it”结构不正确：“stream”需要复数形式或定冠词，且“it”指代不清。改为“the trees and streams there”更清楚地表达喜爱山中的树木和溪流。建议：注意名词的单复数和代词的明确指代。

× It can be seen in climbing a mountain.

✓ You can see them when climbing a mountain.

原句语序和表达不自然，“It can be seen in climbing a mountain”不明确主语和承接对象。改为“you can see them when climbing a mountain”既明确主语又符合口语表达。建议：使用明确主语（如 you 或 they）并使用时间状语“when + -ing”表示在爬山时会看到这些景色。