Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but it is slightly long-winded and contains fillers (uh) and a minor repetition. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, and add one specific detail (e.g., what you like to see) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like noticing small villages and roadside trees, so I always try to get a window seat whenever possible.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is repetitive and has some unclear phrasing ("make perspective of like"). Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, then one specific detail about how or why you take photos, using a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same idea in different words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I like capturing interesting light and patterns. For instance, when driving through farmland I pause to photograph the golden fields and distant hills to remember the view.

Gợi ý: This answer directly addresses the question and gives clear reasons, but contains fillers and small grammatical issues. To improve, use a concise topic sentence, provide two specific reasons joined by linking words, and finish with a brief comment about the sea to show balance.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the majestic views and the fresh, quiet air. However, I haven't been to sea much, so I might try seaside travel in the future to experience that contrast.

× Uh, this is what I do when traveling most of the time because I really love to look outside the window when travelling rather than just to look at the wall side of the road.

✓ Uh, this is what I do when traveling most of the time because I really love looking out of the window when traveling rather than just looking at the walls along the road.

Use of 'to look' after 'love' is less natural than the -ing form: 'love looking'. Also use consistent forms: 'looking out of the window' and 'looking at the walls along the road' use gerunds for parallel structure and clearer prepositions.

× Uh, there was a time when even I had to argue with ticket counter for getting seats, window seats.

✓ Uh, there was a time when I even had to argue with the ticket counter to get window seats.

Missing definite article: 'the ticket counter' is required. Use infinitive 'to get' instead of 'for getting' for purpose. Word order 'I even had' is more natural.

× I always take the best sort of scenery when I'm traveling through my window.

✓ I always take photos of the best scenery when I'm traveling and looking out the window.

Original sentence misuses 'take the best sort of scenery'—we 'take photos of scenery'. Use present participle 'looking' to show simultaneous action: 'traveling and looking out the window'.

× I even make perspective of like looking outside and clicking photos.

✓ I even try to capture different perspectives by looking outside and taking photos.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and informal: 'make perspective of like' is incorrect. Use 'capture different perspectives' and 'taking photos' for clarity and correct verb forms.

× So every time I travel I do take photos of scenery outside the car.

✓ So every time I travel I do take photos of the scenery outside the car.

Count/mass noun issue: 'scenery' often takes the definite article when referring to specific scenery visible from the car: 'the scenery outside the car'.

× I'm so much of A mountain person and I really love to travel on mountain.

✓ I'm really a mountain person and I really love traveling in the mountains.

Incorrect use of capitalized 'A' and article placement. Use 'a mountain person' and idiomatic preposition 'in the mountains' for travelling in mountainous areas.

× Uh, this is because I really love the majestic view and the nature and also the fresh air.

✓ This is because I really love the majestic views, nature, and the fresh air.

Parallel nouns should be plural or consistent: 'majestic views' is more natural. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'nature', or keep as 'nature' without 'the'. Maintain parallel structure in the list.

× I don't have experience of going out in the sea, so maybe in the future I might love to travel on sea too.

✓ I don't have experience going out to sea, so maybe in the future I might like to travel by sea too.

Use correct prepositions: 'go out to sea' and 'travel by sea' are idiomatic. Use 'might like' instead of 'might love' to express tentative preference. 'Travel on sea' is incorrect.