Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid minor grammatical slips (e.g., article use and word order) and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I usually look out of the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the countryside. For example, I like spotting farms and different types of trees, which helps me relax during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and give a specific reason or example. Use one clear sentence to answer, then one supporting sentence with a linking word. Fix small errors (double words, pronoun reference) and avoid vague phrases like "capture" without context.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I want to keep memories of places I visit. For instance, I usually photograph interesting buildings or unusual landscapes so I can look back at them later.

Gợi ý: Form a direct topic sentence and then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (tense, articles, plural/singular) and avoid repetition. Mention a clear experience or feeling to make the answer more convincing.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I have visited them many times and enjoy hiking. For example, I like the fresh air and quiet trails, which help me unwind after a busy week.

× Yes, I do look outside the window while traveling because I love to see the nature.

✓ Yes, I do look out of the window while traveling because I love seeing nature.

The phrase 'look outside the window' is acceptable but 'look out of the window' is more natural. 'To see the nature' is incorrect: 'nature' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the' here, and after 'love' using the -ing form 'loving/seeing' is more natural when referring to general preferences. Suggestion: use 'love seeing nature' or 'I enjoy seeing nature.'

× Yes, I I do take pictures outside the car window because I like to make memories and preserve it. I like to capture.

✓ Yes, I do take pictures out of the car window because I like to make memories and preserve them. I like to capture moments.

Repeated 'I' is a typo. Use 'out of the car window' for natural phrasing. 'Memories' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them,' not 'it.' The fragment 'I like to capture' is incomplete; specify what you capture: 'moments' or 'scenery.' Also avoid unnecessary auxiliary 'do' unless for emphasis; 'I take pictures' is fine.

× OK, I prefer mountains overseas because I have never been to sea and I have I have been to mountains many time and I like going into the mountain because I love mountain.

✓ OK, I prefer mountains abroad because I have never been to the sea and I have been to the mountains many times, and I like going into the mountains because I love them.

Use 'abroad' or 'overseas' but 'mountains overseas' is acceptable; 'overseas' replaced with 'abroad' for naturalness. 'Been to sea' requires the article 'the sea.' 'I have I have' is a repetition typo. 'Mountains' is plural so 'many times' (plural) is required. 'Going into the mountain' should be 'going into the mountains.' 'I love mountain' needs plural or article: 'I love them' or 'I love the mountains.' Pronoun agreement improved by using 'them.'