Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn (tối đa 3–4 câu). Tránh lỗi phát âm/ghép từ như “screenery”, “locking the six greenery” và dùng từ chính xác (scenery, love/keen on green scenery). Sắp xếp ý theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, vì sao, hành động). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, and) để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy the green scenery. I usually take photos with my phone, especially when the light is nice, because it helps me remember the view.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần chính xác ngữ pháp và tránh các cụm từ lộn xộn như “support administrator”, “text photo”. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý dùng thì phù hợp và nối ý bằng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window because it helps me capture interesting views. For example, I like to photograph fields and sunsets with my phone when the light looks perfect.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng: chọn một sở thích chính hoặc nói rõ bạn thích cả hai nhưng giải thích riêng biệt. Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (trekking/hiking, ‘it is one of the best activities’, tránh ‘least good’). Giữ 2–3 câu: ý chính + lý do + ví dụ, dùng liên từ (and, but, because) để liên kết ý.

Ví dụ: I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I had to choose I would pick the mountains because I enjoy trekking and hiking. These activities are great for my fitness, and I often go on day hikes at the weekend.

× I usually look at the window as the screenery when traveling by bus.

✓ I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus.

The phrase 'look out the window' is the correct collocation, and 'scenery' is the correct noun; 'screenery' is a misspelling. Use 'look out the window' or 'look out of the window' and 'scenery' for landscape. Suggestion: Learn common verb+noun collocations (look out, look at) and check spelling of nouns.

× You know, I'm a best fan of locking the six greenery.

✓ You know, I'm a big fan of looking at the green scenery.

Several errors: 'a best fan' should be 'a big fan'; 'locking' is likely a misspelling of 'looking'; 'the six greenery' makes no sense — probably 'the green scenery' or 'the greenery'. Correct phrase: 'a big fan of looking at the greenery' or 'a big fan of green scenery'. Suggestion: Use 'big fan of' for preference; check word choice and spelling.

× And at this time I usually use my camera or in my phone to take a photo.

✓ And at that time I usually use my camera or my phone to take photos.

Use consistent possessive pronouns ('my camera or my phone'). 'In my phone' is incorrect; say 'on my phone' when referring to apps, but for using the device 'my phone' is fine. Also plural 'photos' is more natural. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and correct preposition choices ('on' vs no preposition).

× It's really good for me.

✓ It really makes me happy.

'Good for me' is grammatically possible but sounds awkward here; 'It really makes me happy' conveys the intended feeling more naturally. Suggestion: Choose verbs that express emotional response (make someone happy, cheer someone up).

× Yes, yes, support administrator.

✓ Yes, yes, I do.

'Support administrator' is irrelevant to the context; likely a misrecognition. Replace with a simple confirmation like 'I do' or 'Yes, I do.' Suggestion: Keep answers concise and relevant.

× They usually use the phone or my digital camera to text photo of the scenery.

✓ I usually use my phone or my digital camera to take photos of the scenery.

Subject must be 'I' (the student). 'Text photo' is incorrect; use 'take photos'. Also keep possessives consistent ('my phone or my digital camera'). Suggestion: Ensure subject matches speaker; use 'take' for photographing.

× It is a good way for me to capture the interesting view, especially when the light is nice and it's always put me in a good mood.

✓ It is a good way for me to capture interesting views, especially when the light is nice, and it always puts me in a good mood.

Use plural 'views' or 'the interesting view' consistently; 'it's always put me' is incorrect tense/structure — use 'it always puts me.' Also remove unnecessary article before 'interesting view'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms after conjunctions.

× For this question I would say I prefer both mountain and sea.

✓ For this question, I would say I prefer both the mountains and the sea.

Use plural 'mountains' and include definite article 'the' when referring to general categories like 'the mountains and the sea.' Suggestion: Use plural for general nouns (mountains) and include 'the' when comparing categories.

× For the mountain, I really like to trekking and hiking.

✓ In the mountains, I really like trekking and hiking.

Use gerund 'trekking' without 'to' after 'like' (or use 'to trek and to hike'). 'For the mountain' is awkward — 'In the mountains' is natural. Suggestion: After 'like' use either the gerund (I like trekking) or the infinitive (I like to trek), but be consistent.

× The mountain is I think it's least good activities for people to enhance their health.

✓ I think mountains are one of the best activities for people to improve their health.

'The mountain is I think it's least good activities' is ungrammatical and incoherent. Rephrase: express opinion clearly with correct subject-verb agreement. 'Enhance their health' is okay but 'improve their health' is more natural. Suggestion: Keep sentence structure simple: 'I think... are... good for...'. Use plural 'mountains' or 'hiking' as the activity.

× But the city is also very beautiful.

✓ But the sea is also very beautiful.

Context asks preference between mountains and sea; previous sentence praised mountains, so likely intended 'the sea is also very beautiful.' If referring to 'city', ensure context matches. Suggestion: Maintain topic consistency; use correct noun to match contrast.