Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatical, use a clear topic sentence, add one specific detail and a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct collocations (e.g., "look out of the window", "landscapes", "learn about how people live"). Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy observing different landscapes. For example, I notice the shapes of buildings and how people arrange their homes, which tells me a lot about local life. In addition, watching the changing scenery helps me relax during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence and one specific reason with a linking word; correct grammar and finish your thought. Avoid redundancy ("remember the moment" and "good way to remember"). Use a noun phrase like "a better memory" or "lasting memories."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because they create lasting memories. For instance, I recently photographed a picturesque village at sunset, which helps me recall the colors and atmosphere even months later.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and verb forms ("I prefer the sea", "it is hard to climb", "I love swimming"). Avoid filler words like "See" and "Yeah."

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I find climbing mountains difficult and tiring. Moreover, I love swimming in the ocean and taking photos of coastal scenery, which makes seaside trips more enjoyable for me.

× Yes, I always lookout the window when I travel because I'm able to see different landscape like the shape of building and the ways people live.

✓ Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel because I'm able to see different landscapes, like the shapes of buildings and the ways people live.

Errors: 'lookout' is a noun; the correct phrasal verb is 'look out' (verb) and commonly followed by 'of the window'. 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'different'. 'shape of building' needs plural forms and article/possessive adjustments: 'the shapes of buildings'. Lack of commas before examples reduces clarity. Suggestion: use the phrasal verb 'look out (of)', make nouns plural when referring to multiple items, and add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Even though they look similar, once I look deeply I can know.

✓ Even though they look similar, if I look more closely I can tell the differences.

Errors: 'look deeply' is unnatural; use 'look more closely' or 'look closely'. 'I can know' is incorrect collocation in English; use 'I can tell' or 'I can see' to express perceiving differences. Also 'once' is awkward here—'if' or 'when' fits better. Suggestion: use natural adverb phrases ('more closely') and the correct verbs for perception ('tell', 'see'). Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I always take photographs because it makes me remember the moment more striking and taking photos is good way to remember and.

✓ Yes, I always take photographs because it makes the moment more memorable, and taking photos is a good way to remember it.

Errors: 'it makes me remember the moment more striking' is ungrammatical and mixes ideas; use 'makes the moment more memorable' to express that photos enhance memory. Missing article before 'good way'—should be 'a good way'. The sentence ends with 'and.' which is incomplete; add the object 'it' and complete the clause. Suggestion: rephrase to use 'memorable' and include required articles and objects. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Definitely. See, I don't like mountains because it is hard to climb and I really love swim in the ocean and take photos of the sea.

✓ Definitely. I don't like mountains because they are hard to climb, and I really love swimming in the ocean and taking photos of the sea.

Errors: 'it is hard to climb' misuses singular pronoun for 'mountains' (plural) — use 'they are'. 'I really love swim' is incorrect verb form; use the gerund 'swimming' after 'love'. Also coordinate gerunds for parallelism: 'swimming... and taking photos'. Suggestion: ensure subject-pronoun agreement ('mountains' -> 'they') and use gerunds after verbs like 'love'. Grammar problem type ID:27},{