Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁，并注意句子结构与词汇使用。避免冗长或错误的短语（例如 “the habits of mine”, “cities skyline”）。建议先直接回答（Yes/No + 简短理由），然后用一两句具体细节支持，用连接词保持连贯。注意复数与单数、一致性和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes. I always try to get a window seat so I can enjoy the view. For example, when I travel through the city I like watching the skyline and the different neighborhoods because they give me a sense of the place.

Gợi ý: 内容不够清晰且存在多处用词与逻辑错误（如 “data case building facades”, “make a questionnaire”）。建议先直接回答，说明目的（e.g. for inspiration or memories），然后具体说明如何拍摄或如何使用这些照片，句子应简明且语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes. I often take photos for inspiration. For instance, if I see an interesting building façade I photograph its shape and details, and later I review the pictures to study the design and plan related sketches.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁自然，避免冗余与语法错误（如 “in the moment”, “endless view along the roadside”, “it's a rose my passionate in living”）。建议先给出直接偏好和简短原因，再用一两句具体细节支持，注意词汇搭配与表达情感的恰当说法。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains. I enjoy hiking there because the fresh air and wide views help me relax. For example, after a long walk I often feel refreshed and more positive about life.

× Yes, it's actually the habits of mine.

✓ Yes, it's actually one of my habits.

原句中用法不自然且代词使用错误。“the habits of mine”不是地道表达，应该用“one of my habits”来表示“我的习惯之一”。建议把“the habits of mine”改为“one of my habits”。

× Every time I step on the bus, I would make sure I have a window seat to ensure the beautiful view.

✓ Every time I step on the bus, I make sure I have a window seat to enjoy the beautiful view.

原句使用“would”不符合习惯性动作的表达，习惯性或常规动作应使用一般现在时而不是“would”。此外用“ensure the beautiful view”不恰当，应该用“enjoy the beautiful view”。建议把“would”改为一般现在时“make”，并将“ensure”改为“enjoy”。（时态相关但主要问题为情态动词/习惯表达）

× Meanwhile I can appreciate the cities skyline or the city landscapes.

✓ Meanwhile I can appreciate the city's skyline or the city landscapes.

原句缺少所有格“city's”来修饰“skyline”。此外“cities skyline”应该为“city's skyline”或“cities' skylines”（复数情形）。建议使用“the city's skyline”或若指多个城市则用“cities' skylines”。（同时注意“landscapes”可保留）

× Yes, it's actually a method for me to collect inspiration.

✓ Yes, it's actually a method for me to collect inspiration.

本句语法本身可接受，但若细化可改为更自然的表达：“a way for me to gather inspiration”。此处无需改动。为了遵守只改列表中项，保留原句。

× Whenever I see the data case building facades, I will make a questionnaire to get the whole structures.

✓ Whenever I see interesting building facades, I take notes or make sketches to record the whole structure.

原句中“data case building facades”搭配不自然，词序与词义混乱，“make a questionnaire to get the whole structures”语义不明且用词不当。应使用“take notes”或“make sketches”来记录建筑结构。“will”用于习惯性动作不太自然，改为一般现在时更好。建议用清晰的词汇如“interesting building facades”、“take notes”或“make sketches”。（归类为句子结构/词语使用问题）

× Meanwhile I would go back to do more research one days.

✓ Meanwhile I would go back to do more research one day.

原句“one days”为复数拼写错误，且若表示将来某天应为“one day”；如果表示习惯性动作可用“I would go back”或更自然的“I will go back”。建议把“one days”改为“one day”，并根据语境选择“I will go back”或“I usually go back”。

× For me, it's a tough question, but in the moment I would choose mountains.

✓ For me, it's a tough question, but at the moment I would choose the mountains.

“in the moment”用法不当，正确应为“at the moment”。此外“mountains”前加定冠词“the mountains”更自然。根据语境“would choose”可接受表示偏好，但若表达当前选择，可用“would”或简单“choose”。建议将“in the moment”改为“at the moment”，并在“mountains”前加“the”。

× I sometimes go hiking to make myself relax.

✓ I sometimes go hiking to relax.

“make myself relax”不地道，英语中通常直接用不带“make”或使用“relax myself”很少见。简洁自然的说法是“go hiking to relax”。建议去掉“make myself”。

× Meanwhile I enjoy the fresh air and the endless view along the roadside.

✓ I also enjoy the fresh air and the endless views along the way.

“Meanwhile”位置不自然，句子衔接用“also”更好。“along the roadside”用于徒步或道路旁可以，但更自然为“along the way”。“view”用复数“views”更符合“endless”的语义。建议将“Meanwhile”改为“I also”，并把“view”改为“views”，将“along the roadside”改为“along the way”。

× By doing so, it's a rose my passionate in living.

✓ By doing so, it has strengthened my passion for life.

原句结构混乱且词汇错误：“it's a rose my passionate in living”没有语法意义。应表达“这让我对生活更有热情”，可用“It has strengthened my passion for life”或“It has increased my passion for life”。建议使用明确的动词短语如“strengthened my passion for life”。