Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, remove fillers (umm), correct tense and word choices, and give one or two specific details using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often look out the window when I travel by car or bus because the changing scenery helps me relax. For example, I like watching fields and small towns pass by, and I find that watching the landscape makes long journeys feel shorter.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation words and fix grammar (use correct verb forms). Give a clear reason and one specific example, using a linking word to connect ideas. Limit to three sentences.

Ví dụ: Definitely. I always take photos from the window because I want to remember interesting scenes. For instance, last month I photographed a colorful sunset over the hills, and the pictures remind me of that peaceful moment.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use more precise vocabulary. Remove filler words and complete the final clause. Give a specific reason and an example of an activity you enjoy at the sea, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the blue color and the sense of calm it gives me. For example, I enjoy walking along the shore at sunset because the fresh air and sound of waves help me relax and think clearly.

× Yeah, I really enjoy umm, seeing the beautiful wheel when I traveling by car or bus because it can make me feel relaxed and freedom. But I want to persuade in the travel process.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy seeing the beautiful view when I am traveling by car or by bus because it makes me feel relaxed and free. But I want to rest during the journey.

The original has multiple issues. 'when I traveling' requires the progressive form with a helping verb: 'when I am traveling' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8: Verb + -ing form). 'it can make me' is awkward; use 'it makes me' to match habitual/regular feeling (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'freedom' should be the adjective 'free' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'beautiful wheel' appears to be a word choice error; 'view' fits context (not in the provided list but corrected for meaning). The second sentence 'But I want to persuade in the travel process' is unclear; likely meant 'I want to rest during the journey'—this corrects sentence structure and meaning (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: use 'am' + verb-ing for ongoing actions, match tense for habitual statements, use adjectives where needed, and write clear, complete sentences.

× Definitely yes umm, I love taking pictures when I traveling, so I kind miss any interesting or nice scenery uh, when I traveling because you can make me remember those nice moment.

✓ Definitely, I love taking pictures when I am traveling, so I don't miss any interesting or nice scenery because they help me remember those nice moments.

'when I traveling' needs the auxiliary 'am' with the -ing form: 'when I am traveling' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'kind miss' is incorrect; likely intended 'don't miss' to express prevention of missing scenes (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 'you can make me remember' is incorrect pronoun/structure; use 'they help me remember' to refer to photos (Grammar Problem Type ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'nice moment' should be plural 'nice moments' to match context (Grammar Problem Type ID 1: Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: use correct auxiliary verbs with -ing, choose appropriate negation, use consistent pronouns, and match noun number.

× I prefer the sea 'cause I really like blue and the sea color also blue it give me some quiet freedom feeling, umm make me relax and I really like to sit down or walk by the.

✓ I prefer the sea because I really like the color blue. The sea gives me a peaceful, free feeling; it helps me relax and I really like to sit or walk by it.

Several issues: 'sea color also blue' is ungrammatical; say 'the color blue' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'it give me' needs subject-verb agreement: 'it gives me' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). 'quiet freedom feeling' is awkward adjective order and word choice; 'peaceful, free feeling' is natural (Grammar Problem Type ID 18: Incorrect order of adjectives and Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Missing object after 'by the.' should be 'by it' or 'by the sea' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: ensure correct adjective order, use singular verbs with singular subjects, and complete prepositional phrases with appropriate objects.