Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix common errors (double words, verb forms, articles). Use linking words like 'because' or 'which makes me'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel because I love nature. For example, seeing trees and hills makes me feel calm and relaxed, which helps me forget the stress of the day.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid repeating the same idea. Give one clear reason and one example of what you photograph. Correct verb forms and use concise linking words like 'so' or 'because'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car because I enjoy photography. For instance, I usually capture dramatic skies or interesting landscapes so I can remember the view and sometimes share the best shots on Instagram.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Avoid fillers ('umm') and repetition. Add a brief personal example or consequence to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they are peaceful and the scenery is beautiful. For example, hiking in the mountains helps me relax and clear my mind, so I usually choose mountain destinations when I plan a trip.

× Yes, I always look out the window whenever I I travel because I love nature.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window whenever I travel because I love nature.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'I' which is a typographical/reduplication error causing a sentence structure problem. Remove the extra 'I' so the clause reads clearly. Also keep the present simple tense to indicate habitual action ('always look').

× I'm very curious about nature.

✓ I am very curious about nature.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity keep 'I am'. This is primarily stylistic; no major grammatical error. Use the full form for formal correctness.

× It because whenever I watch outside I feel more peaceful and into the nature I feel myself more comfort.

✓ It is because whenever I look outside I feel more peaceful, and when I am in nature I feel more comfortable.

Multiple errors: missing verb 'is' after 'It', incorrect verb 'watch outside' (use 'look outside'), awkward phrase 'into the nature' (use 'in nature'), and ungrammatical 'I feel myself more comfort' (use 'I feel more comfortable'). Also add conjunctions and commas to improve sentence flow and correct verb forms ('am' + adjective 'comfortable'). This fits present tense habitual reasoning.

× Yes, I always take photos from my car because I love photography and I always wanted to take photos because I want to leave that moment and capturing that moment is very essential for me because I want to post on Instagram and I love photograph.

✓ Yes, I always take photos from my car because I love photography and I have always wanted to take photos to preserve the moment. Capturing that moment is important to me because I want to post on Instagram and I love photography.

Tense consistency and word choice errors: 'always wanted' should be present perfect 'have always wanted' to show an ongoing desire. 'Leave that moment' is incorrect; use 'preserve the moment'. 'Capturing that moment is very essential' is awkward — use 'important'. 'I love photograph' is incorrect noun form; use 'I love photography'. These changes correct tense and use correct noun forms (past participle idea via present perfect) and improve clarity.

× I love mountains umm, I always prefer mountains because mountains are very peaceful and nature is so beautiful as you know I told about earlier, I love nature umm, I whenever I make a plan for anywhere, I always prefer mountain because mountain make me feel so calm, peaceful and.

✓ I love mountains. I always prefer them because mountains are very peaceful and nature is so beautiful, as I mentioned earlier. Whenever I make plans to go anywhere, I always prefer mountains because they make me feel calm and peaceful.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence, repetition, incorrect pronoun/number agreement ('mountain make' should be 'they make' and 'prefer mountain' should be 'prefer mountains'), awkward phrasing 'I told about earlier' (use 'I mentioned earlier'), and incomplete ending. Break into sentences, fix subject-verb agreement, use correct pronouns 'them'/'they', and plural nouns 'mountains'. Ensure tense stays present simple for habitual preferences.