Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words to connect reason and detail. Mention a specific example of a memorable view to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus. I prefer watching the scenery because it makes the journey more interesting, and I often take photos of unusual views. For example, last month I photographed a line of windmills on the highway, which made the trip memorable.

Gợi ý: Make your response direct and grammatically correct. State the main reason first, then give one or two supporting details using linking words (because, so). Avoid repetitive phrasing and vague statements. Offer a brief specific example of how you safely take photos from inside.

Ví dụ: No, I avoid taking photos out of a moving vehicle because it can be dangerous and my equipment might be damaged or stolen. Instead, I take pictures through the window using my phone, which is safer; for example, I once photographed a countryside sunset through the glass without leaning out.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with correct vocabulary (say 'the sea' not 'see'). Give 2–3 clear reasons using linking words and specific details. Avoid mixing unrelated ideas (e.g. skiing at night near the sea). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it's more relaxing and accessible than the mountains. For example, I enjoy swimming and watching the sunset on the beach, and at night you can see the stars and listen to the waves, which helps me unwind.

× Whenever I take travel with bus I always look at the view rather than take a nap because I think it's gonna be such a great view on the road to my journey and I always capture it with my camera.

✓ Whenever I travel by bus I always look at the view rather than take a nap because I think the scenery along the road will be beautiful, and I always capture it with my camera.

The original sentence has incorrect verb phrase 'take travel with bus' and informal 'gonna'. Use 'travel by bus' for correct structure. 'Such a great view on the road to my journey' is awkward; revise to 'the scenery along the road will be beautiful'. Replace 'gonna' with 'will' for standard future. Combine clauses with commas for clarity.

× I don't take photos outside from the car or any vehicles window because it's really dangerous and somebody can steal our cameras and it's really expensive though.

✓ I don't take photos from the outside through a car or any vehicle window because it's really dangerous; someone could steal my camera and it is quite expensive.

Preposition order 'outside from the car' is incorrect; use 'from the outside through a car/vehicle window' or simply 'through a car window'. Replace 'somebody' with 'someone' and 'our cameras' with 'my camera' to match speaker perspective. Use 'could' for possibility instead of 'can' and avoid casual 'though'.

× So for me personally, it's better to just capture the moment inside of your vehicles, like just from inside.

✓ So for me personally, it's better to just capture the moment from inside the vehicle.

Use consistent perspective: 'for me' requires 'my' or generic 'the vehicle' not 'your vehicles'. 'Inside of' is unnecessary; use 'from inside'. Also use singular 'vehicle' to match the situation. Remove repetitive 'just'.

× It can be a very good view. We don't need to put it on out.

✓ It can be a very good view. We don't need to put it out.

Phrase 'put it on out' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'put it out' or 'post it online'; choose 'put it out'. Also ensure pronoun 'it' refers to the photo; maintain singular form.

× I definitely choose to see because it's more convenient for me rather than hiking and it's gonna be so much easier.

✓ I would definitely choose the sea because it is more convenient for me than hiking, and it will be much easier.

Original sentence lacks an object after 'choose' and omits 'the sea'. Replace informal 'gonna' with 'will' and use comparative 'more convenient than hiking'. Use conditional 'would' or 'would definitely choose' for preference; here 'would definitely choose the sea' is clear.

× We can swimming and I could see the nightlife of the ski, like the animals or the stars, and it's just like really relaxing and comfortable for me.

✓ We can go swimming and I can see the nightlife by the sea, like the animals and the stars, and it's really relaxing and comfortable for me.

Use 'go swimming' (infinitive) after 'can', not 'can swimming'. 'Could' mixes modality; use 'can' for ability in present. 'Nightlife of the ski' is incorrect — likely 'nightlife by the sea' or 'at the beach'. Replace 'like' repetition and keep consistent present tense 'is'.