Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول تنظيم إجابتك بشكل أوضح وبأفضل قواعد نحوية. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية قصيرة مباشرة، ثم أضف جملة أو جملتين توضح السبب أو تفاصيل محددة. تجنّب الكلمات العامية المكررة مثل "you know" و"gonna"، وصحّح الأزمنة (مثلاً "I always look" بدلاً من "I always looking"). استخدم كلمات ربط بسيطة مثل "because" و"so" لربط الأفكار.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel. I enjoy watching new landscapes because they make me feel happy and relaxed. For example, when I travel by train I usually watch the countryside and notice small villages and fields, which helps me pass the time.

Gợi ý: اصغر عدد الحشو والتكرار واستخدم تراكيب صحيحة وواضحة. قلل التردّد (مثل "I, I, I") وصحّح الأخطاء النحوية مثل "it depends" و"pictures" و"I keep the phone in my pocket" بدلاً من "in mind". أضف سببًا محددًا لقرارك لاستخدام الهاتف أو عدمه.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I'm alone, I usually take photos or videos of the view because I like to keep memories. However, when I'm with others I prefer not to use my phone so I can enjoy the conversation or avoid bothering them.

Gợi ý: قدّم إجابة مباشرة ثم تفاصيل محددة قصيرة تدعم رأيك. تجنّب العبارات العامية غير الضرورية مثل "you know" و"so for sure"، وصحّح الاتفاق النحوي (مثلاً "they have" أو "it offers"). أضف أمثلة محددة توضح لماذا تفضّل الجبال مثل الأنشطة أو المشاهد التي تستمتع بها.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea. I enjoy mountain views because they are dramatic and peaceful, and I like activities such as hiking and climbing. For example, last year I climbed a nearby peak and the panorama from the top was unforgettable.

× And this is what I'm doing when I'm in train, I always looking to the window, you know.

✓ And this is what I do when I'm on a train: I am always looking out of the window, you know.

The original sentence misused continuous and base verb forms. 'I'm doing' is unnecessary; simple present 'I do' fits habitual action. 'I'm in train' lacks article and correct preposition: use 'on a train'. 'I always looking' is missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous: 'I am always looking' or better 'I always look'. Use 'looking out of the window' (phrasal preposition) for correct English usage. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits ('I do' or 'I always look') and include appropriate articles and auxiliaries; use 'on a train' and 'look out of the window'.

× Uh, it's depend on the situation.

✓ Uh, it depends on the situation.

The sentence uses 'it's depend' which mixes 'it is' with a base verb. The correct form is the present simple 'it depends' to express general truth. Modal verbs are not needed here; subject-verb agreement (third person singular) requires the '-s' ending. Suggestion: Use 'it depends' for general statements; ensure third person singular verbs end with '-s'.

× Sometimes when I'm alone, I prefer to take some videos and some picture, but if there's someone else with me so I, I, I don't like to take any videos or feed or photos.

✓ Sometimes when I'm alone, I prefer to take some videos and some pictures, but if there's someone else with me, I don't like to take any videos or photos.

The word 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'some'. 'Feed' is incorrect word choice here; likely meant 'video' or 'photos'. Also extra filler 'so I, I, I' is unnecessary. Fix comma placement and remove redundant words. Suggestion: Use plural when referring to multiple items ('pictures'); avoid filler words; use 'photos' not 'feed' in this context.

× So I just keep the phone in mind.

✓ So I just keep the phone in my pocket.

'Keep the phone in mind' means to remember the phone, not to hold it physically. The speaker likely means a physical location such as 'in my pocket' or 'in my bag'. Choose the correct preposition phrase to match intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'in my pocket' or 'in my bag' for physical storage; use 'in mind' only for remembering.

× For sure, because you know, when you see new so amazing view, you're gonna be happy.

✓ For sure, because when you see such an amazing new view, you'll be happy.

Pronoun and determiner issues: 'you know' is informal and can be omitted. 'see new so amazing view' has wrong word order and missing article; correct is 'such an amazing new view' or 'a new, amazing view'. 'You're gonna' is informal spoken 'you are going to'; in test-style responses use 'you'll' or 'you are going to'. Suggestion: Use correct word order 'such an amazing new view' and standard contractions or full forms ('you'll' or 'you are going to').

× For me, because you know that I had a different experience, so for sure I like the mountains because it has a very incredible view and you can climb it.

✓ For me, because I have had different experiences, I definitely prefer the mountains because they have incredible views and you can climb them.

Tense and agreement errors: 'I had a different experience' is past simple but context needs present perfect 'I have had' to link past experience to present preference. 'I like the mountains because it has...' uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'mountains'; use 'they have' and plural 'views' or 'an incredible view' for a single mountain. 'for sure' and 'you know' are informal; use 'definitely' instead. Suggestion: Use present perfect to connect past experiences to present ('I have had'); ensure pronoun agreement with plural nouns ('they' for 'mountains'); prefer 'definitely' for clarity.