Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and reduce fillers (uh). Add one specific detail about what you enjoy seeing and why, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus. I find the countryside calming because I enjoy seeing green fields and small villages, which help me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and explain briefly why you don't take photos. Use a linking word to connect reason to effect and provide a specific example.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car. I prefer to simply enjoy the view because looking at the mountains refreshes my mind and helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (mountains), fix grammar (use 'mountains' plural and correct verbs), avoid repetition, and add a clear supporting reason with a specific childhood memory or detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they make me feel peaceful. When I was a child, my family often went to a small mountain village, and the fresh air and quiet walks still calm me today, so I always choose mountains over the sea.

× I look out the window when I traveling by bus because it's reaching my mind and uh, I love the nature and I always prefer this type of places when I see the out of the window.

✓ I look out the window when I am traveling by bus because it clears my mind. I love nature and I always prefer places like that when I look out of the window.

The phrase 'I traveling' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous form (verb in the present participle). Replace 'it's reaching my mind' with a natural expression 'it clears my mind' because 'reach one's mind' is not idiomatic. 'The nature' should be 'nature' (no article) and 'this type of places' should be 'places like that' for natural phrasing. Also split run-on sentence into two for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I am traveling' for ongoing action and use natural collocations like 'clears my mind' and 'look out of the window'.

× I don't take a photos outside the car window because I don't like this type of things and when I someone see the mountains it refreshes my mind and I relax.

✓ I don't take photos out of the car window because I don't like those kinds of things. When I see the mountains they refresh my mind and help me relax.

'a photos' is incorrect: 'photos' is plural so no 'a' article; 'out of the car window' is more natural than 'outside the car window'. 'this type of things' is ungrammatical; use 'those kinds of things' or 'this kind of thing' depending on singular/plural. 'when I someone see the mountains' is incorrect word order; remove 'someone' and use 'When I see the mountains'. 'it refreshes my mind' should agree with plural 'mountains' so use 'they refresh my mind'. Suggestion: ensure article matches singular/plural and correct word order, and make subject-verb agreement consistent.

× I always prefer the mountain because it's breaching my mind and when I see the mountains it's relaxing me very much and I feel very much and I love this type of things on my childhood and.

✓ I always prefer the mountains because they calm my mind. When I see the mountains I feel very relaxed, and I have loved them since my childhood.

Mixing singular and plural: 'the mountain' and later 'the mountains' is inconsistent. Use plural 'mountains' throughout if referring generally. 'It's breaching my mind' is not idiomatic; use 'they calm my mind' or 'they refresh my mind.' 'It's relaxing me very much and I feel very much' is awkward; use 'I feel very relaxed.' 'I love this type of things on my childhood and.' is ungrammatical: use 'I have loved them since my childhood.' Suggestion: keep number consistent, choose natural verbs for emotional effects (calm/refresh), use correct tense for a past-to-present state ('have loved since childhood'), and remove extra conjunctions.