Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar, give a direct topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct vocabulary mistakes (bus, car) and avoid repetition. Keep answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching changing fields and small villages pass by because they help me relax. Also, sometimes I notice interesting architecture or people, so I take a mental photo of the scene.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and natural by starting with a clear direct answer, then add a concise reason using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "ride the car" -> "I'm in a moving car"; "makes me difficult" -> "makes it difficult for me").

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do, but not very often. This is because when I am in a moving car it is difficult to take a clear photo, and windows can be dirty. Therefore I usually take photos only when the vehicle stops or the view is exceptional.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two specific reasons linked coherently. Correct grammar ("go mountain" -> "the mountains"; remove hesitations). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" and "also".

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea. This is because I cannot swim, so I feel safer hiking, and also there are many scenic hills near my hometown where I often go for fresh air and exercise.

× I really like to see outside of the bus or call with by the window.

✓ I really like to look out of the bus or car window.

The student used incorrect prepositions and words: 'see outside of the bus' and 'call with by the window' are ungrammatical. Use the verb 'look' with the prepositional phrase 'out of' or 'out the' and the noun 'car' (not 'call'). Suggested form: 'look out of the bus or car window.' This fixes preposition choice and word form errors. Suggested improvement: practice common verbs for viewing scenery (look, watch, see) plus the correct prepositional phrase 'out of/ out the ... window.'

× Oh, when I write something like call, the landscape from the window is usually very beautiful.

✓ Oh, when I write something like 'call', the landscape outside the window is usually very beautiful.

The issue is misuse of location expression. 'From the window' is not wrong but 'outside the window' is more natural. Also 'call' seems to be a wrong word; if the student means 'car' they should use 'car'. Keep verb forms consistent. Suggestion: choose correct noun ('car') and use natural preposition 'outside the window.'

× That's the reason why I like to.

✓ That's the reason why I like to do that.

The sentence ends with an incomplete infinitive 'like to' lacking an object or verb. Complete the structure with 'do that' or a specific verb ('look', 'watch'). Improvement: always finish 'like to' with an action: 'like to look out the window.'

× Sometimes I do that, but not often.

✓ Sometimes I do, but not often.

This is stylistic: 'do that' is grammatical but redundant. Using 'do' alone is more natural. No strong grammar error; keep concise responses in speaking tests.

× This is because when I ride the car, it's moving so it makes me difficult to take a photo.

✓ This is because when I ride in the car, it's moving, so it's difficult for me to take a photo.

Use 'ride in the car' not 'ride the car'. Also 'it makes me difficult' is ungrammatical: use 'it's difficult for me' or 'it makes it difficult for me.' Also add comma and adjust clause order. Improvement: learn verb+preposition combos (ride in/drive a car) and correct existential constructions ('it's difficult for me to ...').

× I absolutely prefer to go mountain.

✓ I absolutely prefer going to the mountains.

'Go mountain' is ungrammatical: use 'go to the mountains' (plural) or 'go to the mountain' with article. In general 'prefer going to the mountains' is natural. Improvement: memorize common collocations: 'go to the mountains', 'go to the sea.'

× I I don't.

✓ I don't (like swimming).

This fragment likely repeats and lacks an object. Provide full sentence: 'I don't (like swimming).' Ensure no repeated words; complete the thought. Improvement: avoid filler repetition and finish the clause. Note: corrected form based on next sentence that explains reason.

× I am not good at swimming so I usually don't go to the sea.

✓ I'm not good at swimming, so I usually don't go to the sea.

Mainly punctuation and contraction; grammar is acceptable. Add comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: use contraction 'I'm' and include comma for compound sentence clarity.

× However, there are lots of mountains near my hometown so I usually go to the mountain.

✓ However, there are lots of mountains near my hometown, so I usually go to the mountains.

The student used singular 'the mountain' after mentioning 'mountains.' Maintain plural consistency: 'go to the mountains.' Add comma before 'so.' Improvement: keep number agreement between referenced nouns.