Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Shorten and clarify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, limit filler words, and include one specific detail. Use one linking phrase to connect ideas. Pronunciation and grammar need small fixes (e.g., "car's or bus's window" → "car or bus window", "beautiful moments/sceneries" → "beautiful scenes").

Ví dụ: Yes. I usually look out of the car or bus window because the view refreshes me. For example, seeing green fields or old buildings helps me relax and inspires me to take photos. Therefore I prefer watching the scenery while travelling.

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct and more concise. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms ("if I see"), reduce repetition, and give one concrete example of what you photograph. Use a linking word like "for example" to add detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. If I see an interesting building or attractive landscape, I usually take a photo or short video. For example, last month I filmed a historic temple from the bus because the light made its colors look amazing.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then two clear supporting reasons using linking words. Correct grammar ("I prefer the mountains"), avoid hesitations, and finish the thought—give a complete example or consequence. Use specific details about activities you enjoy in mountains.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because the air is fresher and the scenery is more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy hiking on mountain trails which helps me stay fit and reduces stress, whereas beaches are often crowded and noisy.

× 'I usually prefer to look outside of my cars or bus window because I really want to look outside and really want to feel refreshed.'

✓ 'I usually prefer to look out of my car or bus window because I really want to look outside and feel refreshed.'

'Outside of' with vehicle parts is nonstandard; use 'out of' or 'out' and match singular/plural with 'car' or 'bus'. Also use parallel structure: "look outside and feel refreshed" (omit repeated "really want to"). Suggestion: say "look out of the car or bus window" or simply "look out of the window.'

× 'I usually prefer to look outside of my cars or bus window because I really want to look outside and really want to feel refreshed.'

✓ 'I usually prefer to look out of my car or bus window because I really want to look outside and feel refreshed.'

'Cars or bus window' mixes plural and singular; the subject (window) must agree. Use 'car or bus window' or 'cars' and 'buses' consistently. Better: 'my car or bus window'.

× 'And the, of course, I have to capture a beautiful moments and beautiful sceneries, uh, in my eyes.'

✓ 'And, of course, I have to capture beautiful moments and beautiful scenery with my eyes.'

'A' cannot be used with plural 'moments' and 'sceneries' is uncountable so use 'scenery'. Also 'in my eyes' is awkward—use 'with my eyes'. Remove unnecessary article 'the' and filler words. Suggest: 'capture beautiful moments and scenery with my eyes.'

× 'And the, of course, I have to capture a beautiful moments and beautiful sceneries, uh, in my eyes.'

✓ 'And, of course, I have to capture beautiful moments and beautiful scenery with my eyes.'

'A beautiful moments' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'sceneries' is incorrect because 'scenery' is typically uncountable. Use plural 'moments' without 'a' and uncountable 'scenery'.

× 'So I prefer looking outside because it freshens my mind as well.'

✓ 'So I prefer looking outside because it refreshes my mind as well.'

'It freshens my mind' is understandable but 'refreshes' is more idiomatic with 'mind'. Ensure present simple for habitual preference: 'I prefer' and 'refreshes' agree.

× 'Yes, of course, if I seen something beautiful, uh, building and beautiful architecture or anything else which, uh, which captures in my mind, I definitely like to take the picture or video of that particular, uh, particular scenery because of course I have to, uh, because it's my habit to take pictures of beautiful things whenever I go outside.'

✓ 'Yes, of course. If I see something beautiful, a building or beautiful architecture or anything else that catches my eye, I definitely like to take a picture or video of that scenery because it is my habit to take pictures of beautiful things whenever I go out.'

'If I seen' is incorrect past form; correct conditional requires present simple 'see'. 'Catches my eye' is a natural alternative to 'captures in my mind'. Use 'a picture' not 'the picture' and 'whenever I go out' for general habit. Maintain present simple for general truths.

× 'So I prefer looking outside because it freshens my mind as well.'

✓ 'So I prefer to look outside because it refreshes my mind as well.'

'Prefer' can be followed by either 'to + verb' or verb+ing; both are possible but switching to 'prefer to look' reads more natural here. Keep forms consistent in the sentence.

× 'Yes, of course, if I seen something beautiful, uh, building and beautiful architecture or anything else which, uh, which captures in my mind, I definitely like to take the picture or video of that particular, uh, particular scenery because of course I have to, uh, because it's my habit to take pictures of beautiful things whenever I go outside.'

✓ 'Yes, of course. If I see something beautiful, a building or interesting architecture or anything else that catches my eye, I definitely like to take a picture or video of that scenery because it is my habit to take pictures of beautiful things whenever I go out.'

'Capture in my mind' is awkward; use 'catch my eye'. 'Take the picture or video of' should be 'take a picture or video of'. 'Whenever I go outside' is grammatical but 'go out' is more idiomatic for leaving the house.

× 'So moreover, I prefer at the mountains view because I find the fresh air, uh, at peaceful scenery, uh, at, uh, mountains are like more relaxing than the seaside because usually the seasides are more busy than the mountains.'

✓ 'Moreover, I prefer mountain views because I find the fresh air and peaceful scenery on mountains more relaxing than the seaside, which is usually busier.'

'Prefer at the mountains view' is incorrect word order and preposition. Use plural 'mountain views' or 'the mountains'. 'Seasides' is rarely used; 'seaside' or 'the seaside' is better. Correct comparative structure: 'more relaxing than the seaside' and keep noun forms consistent.

× 'So moreover, I prefer at the mountains view because I find the fresh air, uh, at peaceful scenery, uh, at, uh, mountains are like more relaxing than the seaside because usually the seasides are more busy than the mountains.'

✓ 'Moreover, I prefer mountain views because I find the fresh air and peaceful scenery in the mountains more relaxing than at the seaside, which is usually busier.'

Avoid repeating 'at' incorrectly. Use 'in the mountains' or 'on the mountains' depending on context; 'in the mountains' is common. Use 'at the seaside' or 'the seaside' for comparison. 'Seasides are more busy' should be 'the seaside is usually busier.'

× 'So even though the hiking on mountains can also maintain me fit and healthy.'

✓ 'Even hiking in the mountains can also keep me fit and healthy.'

'The hiking on mountains' is awkward; use 'hiking in the mountains' or 'mountain hiking'. 'Maintain me fit' is incorrect — use 'keep me fit'. Use present simple modal/ability: 'can keep me'.

× 'So even though the hiking on mountains can also maintain me fit and healthy.'

✓ 'Even hiking in the mountains can also keep me fit and healthy.'

'On mountains' is not the typical preposition; 'in the mountains' or 'in mountain areas' is correct. Use 'keep me' instead of 'maintain me'. Suggestion: 'Hiking in the mountains keeps me fit and healthy.'

× 'So for example, if I, if I spend more.'

✓ 'For example, if I spend more time there, ...'

This sentence is incomplete and lacks an object and main clause. Add what is spent (time) and finish the conditional thought. Suggestion: 'For example, if I spend more time there, I would feel healthier.'