Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using present simple for habitual actions, avoid tense inconsistency, and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car, especially in rural areas. For example, I enjoy watching mountains and wide green fields because they help me relax. Also, I often point out interesting sights to my family while we drive.

Gợi ý: Give a concise and coherent answer: state whether you take photos, then explain briefly why and how. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating the same idea. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'listen to calm music', 'while the music is playing').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos and short videos through the car window because I enjoy capturing peaceful landscapes. For example, I sometimes record clips while calm music is playing so I can edit them later into short videos.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide two specific reasons with linking words. Remove fillers like 'uh' and correct grammar (e.g., 'go to the sea', 'read books'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I find it relaxing and I often go to the seaside at weekends. For instance, in summer I enjoy sitting by the water and reading books, which helps me unwind.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I was traveling by car.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by car.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I look' with past tense 'was traveling'. Use present continuous 'am traveling' to match 'I look' and the habitual action context. Suggestion: use 'when I am traveling' for current/habitual actions.

× I look out mostly outside when I was travelling in a rural area.

✓ I look out mostly when I am travelling in rural areas.

The original mixes present 'I look' with past 'was travelling' and uses redundant 'outside'. Change to present continuous 'am travelling' for habitual action and remove redundant 'outside'. Use plural 'areas' for general statement.

× I love to watch beautiful views like mountains and greenery from my car view.

✓ I love to watch beautiful views like mountains and greenery from my car.

'From my car view' is unidiomatic. Use the preposition phrase 'from my car' to indicate viewpoint. Also 'views like' is acceptable; no tense change needed.

× Yes, I love to take photos of the scenery outside from my car window because I love to listen calm music and I also make videos of the scenery with the music while the music playing in my car and I love it.

✓ Yes, I love to take photos of the scenery outside my car window because I like to listen to calm music, and I also make videos of the scenery with the music playing in my car.

Several issues: 'listen calm music' needs verb+preposition 'listen to' and 'calm music' works as noun phrase; 'while the music playing' requires a verb form: 'with the music playing' or 'while the music is playing'. Also remove repetitive 'I love it' and change one 'love' to 'like' for variety. Combine clauses with commas and 'and' for clarity.

× I prefer the sea because, uh, I love to sit nearby the sea and uh, I usually go nearby sea on every weekend.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love to sit near the sea, and I usually go to the sea every weekend.

Use 'near' or 'nearby' before nouns correctly: 'sit near the sea'. For visiting, use 'go to the sea' and 'every weekend' (not 'on every weekend'). Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech.

× In the summertime, I like to sit there and read a books.

✓ In the summertime, I like to sit there and read a book.

'A books' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'books'. Use singular 'a book' or plural without 'a' ('read books'). Choose 'a book' for a single item.

× So I always prefer sea rather than mountain.

✓ So I always prefer the sea to the mountains.

Compare two nouns: use definite articles with natural features ('the sea', 'the mountains') and use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A rather than B'. Also use plural 'mountains' when speaking generally.