Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Verbessern Sie die Grammatik und die Flüssigkeit: Vermeiden Sie unnötige Worte und korrigieren Sie Zeitformen und Wortstellung. Beginnen Sie mit einer klaren thematischen Aussage, dann geben Sie eine kurze Erklärung und ein Beispiel. Nutzen Sie verbindende Wörter (z. B. because, so) korrekt und vermeiden Sie Wiederholungen wie "I'm not doing it". Halten Sie die Antwort auf 2–4 Sätze.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't. I often get carsick, so I prefer to close my eyes and listen to music to stay calm.

Gợi ý: Kürzen Sie die Antwort und verbessern Sie die Formulierungen: Verwenden Sie präzise Phrasen wie "I don't" und vermeiden Sie unnatürliche Ausdrücke wie "I don't use that". Nennen Sie kurz die Ursache und geben Sie ein kurzes konkretes Beispiel mit korrekter Grammatik. Verwenden Sie verbindende Wörter (e.g. "because", "so", "for example").

Ví dụ: No, I don't. Because I get carsick, taking photos in a moving car makes me feel nauseous; for example, once I tried to photograph a building and felt sick immediately.

Gợi ý: Strukturieren Sie die Antwort klarer und vermeiden Sie umgangssprachliche Ausdrücke: Starten mit einer direkten Aussage (I prefer the mountains), geben Sie einen Grund und ein kurzes Kontrastbeispiel. Ersetzen Sie informelle Wendungen wie "super sensitive" durch etwas neutraleres wie "very sensitive". Halten Sie 2–4 Sätze und nutzen Sie verbindende Wörter (although, however, because).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I find them peaceful and refreshing. However, the sea is also lovely and feels liberating, but my skin is very sensitive to the sun, so I usually avoid long beach days.

× The reason why I'm not doing it because I'm easily getting carsick.

✓ The reason I don't is that I easily get carsick.

This sentence uses an incorrect continuous present form and redundant structure. Use simple present for habitual states: 'I don't' and 'I easily get carsick'. Also replace 'because' with 'is that' to connect reason clause correctly.

× So in order to keep me calm and steady, I prefer to listen to some music and close my eyes.

✓ So in order to keep myself calm and steady, I prefer to listen to some music and close my eyes.

Use the reflexive pronoun 'myself' after 'keep' when referring to the subject. The rest is correct; no verb -ing form change is needed.

× No I don't use that.

✓ No, I don't do that.

'Use that' is unnatural here; 'do that' matches the earlier question about taking photos. Also add a comma after 'No'.

× As I mentioned before, I'm easily getting car sick so taking pictures during the car drive would make me feel very ill in my stomach.

✓ As I mentioned before, I easily get carsick, so taking pictures during a car ride would make my stomach feel very sick.

Use simple present 'I easily get carsick' for a habitual tendency. 'Car ride' is more natural than 'car drive'. Rephrase result clause to 'make my stomach feel very sick' for natural English.

× Last time I tried to do it because I saw a beautiful building but I immediately felt sick.

✓ Last time I tried it because I saw a beautiful building, but I immediately felt sick.

Omit the unnecessary 'to do' after 'tried' when followed by a pronoun. Add a comma before 'but' to separate clauses.

× I guess I prefer the mountains even though I'm not a big hiking fan, but on the other hand the sea is really beautiful and gives me a feeling of freedom.

✓ I guess I prefer the mountains even though I'm not a big fan of hiking, but on the other hand the sea is really beautiful and gives me a feeling of freedom.

Use the noun phrase 'a big fan of hiking' rather than 'a big hiking fan' for more natural English.

× It's just my skin is like super sensitive to the sun and I have to be really careful with that.

✓ It's just that my skin is super sensitive to the sun, and I have to be really careful about it.

Add 'that' after 'It's just' to introduce the clause. 'Super sensitive' is fine, but use 'careful about it' rather than 'careful with that' for natural collocation.