Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and unnecessary questions. For example, mention particular things you notice (architecture, people, landscapes) and why you enjoy them.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy observing local architecture and daily life. For instance, I like watching old buildings and busy markets, which help me understand a place better.

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatical. Begin with a direct answer (No, I don't usually) then explain the reason using linking words (because, so). Use correct verb forms and accurate words (blurred, video). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving car because they often turn out blurred. Instead, I prefer to record short videos so I can capture the atmosphere more clearly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct comparative form (prefer the sea to the mountains). Give specific reasons and link them logically. Avoid fillers (uh) and repetition. Mention one or two concrete activities you enjoy at the sea and contrast briefly with mountains.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I love watching sunsets and relaxing on the beach. In contrast, mountain trips often feel hectic to me because of long hikes and difficult terrain.

× Of course, yes, I always look out the window at the scenario when I traveling by bus or by car and I really enjoy to do a sightseeing in other countries when I was traveling so I can get it that.

✓ Of course, yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus or by car, and I really enjoy sightseeing in other countries when I travel so I can see it.

Errors: 'traveling' in this context requires the present continuous form 'am traveling' for 'I' (present participle with auxiliary). 'to do a sightseeing' is incorrect: 'sightseeing' is a gerund; use 'enjoy sightseeing' not 'enjoy to do a sightseeing'. 'scenario' is wrong choice; use 'scenery'. 'when I was traveling' mixes past tense with general habit; use simple present 'when I travel'. Suggestions: use 'am traveling' for ongoing action or 'when I travel' for habitual actions; replace 'to do a sightseeing' with 'sightseeing' and 'scenario' with 'scenery'.

× No, I don't really mind to take a photos of the second area outside the car window and I prefer to do a video because if I was photo that situation it can be bluer so I prefer to take a video of it.

✓ No, I don't really mind taking photos of the scenery outside the car window, and I prefer to record a video because if I took photos of that situation they can be blurry, so I prefer to take a video of it.

Errors: 'to take a photos' mixes 'to' with plural noun; correct form is 'taking photos' (gerund + plural noun) or 'to take a photo' (singular). 'second area' is unclear; use 'scenery'. 'do a video' is incorrect; use 'record a video' or 'make a video'. 'if I was photo' is wrong tense and form; use 'if I took photos'. 'bluer' is incorrect comparative; use 'blurry'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'mind' ('mind taking'), match article and count ('a photo' vs 'photos'), use proper verb for creating video ('record'), and use past tense for hypothetical condition ('if I took photos').

× I prefer sea than the mountains because I really love a sunset and I love, like to play with a sun.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I really love a sunset and I like to play in the sun.

Errors: 'prefer sea than' uses wrong preposition; correct pattern is 'prefer A to B'. Missing definite article before 'sea' and 'mountains' in this general preference; use 'the sea' and 'the mountains'. 'I love, like to play with a sun' is ungrammatical: use 'I like to play in the sun' or 'I love the sun'. Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B', include 'the' for general nouns like 'the sea', and use 'play in the sun'.

× I prefer sea than a mountain because mountain, uh, in my eyes, that's it, uh, hectic traveling and I don't like hectic traveling.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because mountains, in my eyes, mean hectic travel, and I don't like hectic travel.

Errors: again 'prefer sea than' should be 'prefer the sea to the mountains'. 'a mountain' vs 'mountain' inconsistent; use plural 'mountains' or 'a mountain' consistently. 'mountain, uh, in my eyes, that's it' is disfluent and ungrammatical; rephrase to 'mountains, in my eyes, mean hectic travel'. 'hectic traveling' is awkward; use 'hectic travel' or 'hectic trips'. Suggestions: use consistent noun forms, correct 'prefer A to B', and use 'travel' or 'trips' rather than 'traveling' as a noun.