Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and correct tense and grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct agreement and article use, and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add one specific detail to enrich your answer using a linking word (for example or because).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I enjoy watching changing landscapes because they are often very beautiful, especially when I drive through countryside or past rivers. For example, last month I watched golden fields and small villages, which made the trip relaxing.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and use correct expressions: say whether you take photos now (present tense) and avoid repeating words. Use linking words (so or because) and give one specific example of when or what you photograph. Correct countable/uncountable forms (scenery not sceneries).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos outside the car window because the scenery is beautiful. For instance, I like to photograph mountain ranges or unusual cloud formations when we pass them, so I can remember the view later.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word (because or so). Fix grammar: use plural forms (mountains), say ‘go hiking’ not ‘go to hiking’, and make sentences concise. Add one concrete detail to make the answer vivid.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they make me feel calm and focused. I usually go hiking with friends every Sunday, and walking through forests and up ridges helps me relax and clear my mind, especially when we reach a viewpoint with wide, peaceful scenery.

× When I was traveling, I usually look out at the window, uh, because of the scenery is really beautiful and aesthetic, so I love to spend the time looking out the window of the car.

✓ When I travel, I usually look out of the window because the scenery is really beautiful and aesthetic, so I love to spend time looking out of the car window.

Error types: mixture of past and habitual present (present tense issue) and incorrect preposition use. 'When I was traveling' suggests past; for habitual actions use simple present 'When I travel' or 'I usually travel' and 'I usually look' (not 'look' with past marker). Also use preposition 'look out of' or 'look out' + 'window' and 'looking out of the car window' is more natural. Remove unnecessary filler words and 'the time' -> 'time'. Suggestion: Use consistent simple present for habitual actions and correct prepositions: 'When I travel, I usually look out of the window.'

× Well, in my personal, I always took the window. Uh, I always take a photo outside the car for the scenery because it's really beautiful sceneries and I make make me enjoy.

✓ Well, personally, I always take photos out of the car window of the scenery because it's really beautiful and makes me enjoy the trip.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'in my personal' (use adverb 'personally'), incorrect tense mixing 'always took' (past) with present habit 'always take' and wrong noun plurality/word order. 'Sceneries' is uncountable/rare; use 'scenery' or 'beautiful views'. 'I make make me enjoy' is ungrammatical; correct is 'it makes me enjoy the trip' or 'it makes me happy'. Suggestion: Use 'personally' and simple present for habitual actions, use 'take photos out of the car window', use 'scenery' or 'views', and use clear subject for 'makes me...'. Note grammar problem types referenced: 9 (past participle misuse) and 11 (preposition) and 13 (adjective/adverb usage).

× In my point of view, I prefer the mountain. I usually go to hiking every Sunday with my friends and the scenery and view, it's really beautiful, make me peaceful and focus on I'm doing.

✓ In my point of view, I prefer the mountains. I usually go hiking every Sunday with my friends, and the scenery and views are really beautiful; they make me feel peaceful and help me focus on what I'm doing.

Errors: 'the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' when speaking generally. 'Go to hiking' is incorrect; correct is 'go hiking' or 'go for a hike'. Run-on sentence and subject-verb agreement: 'the scenery and view, it's really beautiful' should be 'the scenery and views are really beautiful'. 'make me peaceful and focus on I'm doing' is ungrammatical; fix to 'they make me feel peaceful and help me focus on what I'm doing'. Suggestion: Use plural for general preference, correct verb patterns ('go hiking'), ensure subject-verb agreement and clear clause structure.