Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word order, and avoid repetition. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences). Mention one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because / so). Check grammar: say “I prefer looking out of the window” or “I prefer to look out of the window”, and use comparative phrases correctly.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to look out of the window, especially the seat behind the driver, because the window is larger so I can see more of the view. However, sometimes I cannot see well when the window is dirty or fogged up, so I choose a different seat.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer and give one or two clear reasons or a short example. Correct tenses and possessive forms, remove repetition, and use linking words (for example, when / because / so). Keep sentences simple and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of interesting buildings when my father points them out. For example, he once showed me a building built in 1994, so I took a picture and saved it in a folder to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons with correct grammar and past tense forms for the anecdote. Use linking words (because / when / so) and avoid fillers (uh). Provide a concise personal example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they are high and offer wide views of the surrounding area, which I enjoy. When I was a child, my father often took me there, and I still have many photographs from those trips.

× Actually I prefer to looking in the window, specially the window that's behind the driver because in my opinion that the windows large and I can't see everything. But unfortunately as as in a circumstance the warm I can't see the window because all.

✓ Actually I prefer looking out of the window, especially the window behind the driver, because in my opinion that window is large and I can't see everything. But unfortunately, in warm weather I sometimes can't see through the window.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the -ing form (gerund) or 'to' + infinitive; 'prefer to looking' is incorrect. Use 'looking' or 'to look'. 'Look out of the window' and 'especially' are the correct preposition and spelling. 'the windows large' lacks the verb 'is' and has incorrect number; change to 'that window is large'. The phrase 'as as in a circumstance the warm' is ungrammatical; intended meaning appears to be 'in warm weather'. Also 'can't see the window because all' is unclear; likely meant 'can't see through the window'. Suggestions: use 'prefer looking out of the window', ensure subject-verb link with 'is', use correct prepositions and standard weather phrase 'in warm weather'.

× Yes, I do sometime when I my father, my father show me this building is was built in in 1994. You take it picture, I take picture and I put it in my file to memory and I really enjoy to take a take a picture for this.

✓ Yes, I do sometimes when my father shows me that this building was built in 1994. You take its picture, I take a picture and I put it in my file as a memory and I really enjoy taking pictures of it.

Multiple article and verb form problems occur. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). Remove the extra 'when I'. 'My father show' needs third person singular agreement 'my father shows' (use grammar problem ID 2 but primary here is article/errors). 'This building is was built' has unnecessary 'is' and should be past passive 'was built' because it describes a past event. 'You take it picture' should use possessive adjective 'its' and 'take a picture' needs article 'a'. 'Put it in my file to memory' is unnatural; use 'put it in my file as a memory'. 'Enjoy to take a take a picture' should be 'enjoy taking pictures' (verb + -ing). Suggestions: check subject-verb agreement for third person singular, use 'was built' for past passive, use articles ('a', 'its'), and use gerunds after 'enjoy'.

× I prefer the mountain because the mountain is highest from the land and I can see everything in one area.

✓ I prefer the mountains because the mountains are higher than the land and I can see everything in one area.

'The mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' when speaking generally. 'Is highest from the land' is incorrect comparative/superlative and preposition: use comparative 'are higher than the land'. 'Highest' is a superlative and would require a group to compare to (e.g. 'the highest in the region'). Suggestions: use plural to generalise, use comparative 'higher than' when comparing two things, and place adjectives correctly.

× So, uh, when I was child, my father always, uh, take me and we went there and I take picture from there.

✓ So, when I was a child, my father always took me there and we went there and I took pictures there.

'When I was child' needs article 'a child'. 'My father always take me' and 'I take picture' are present forms used incorrectly in a past habitual context; use past tense 'took' and 'took pictures'. 'We went there' is correct past tense. Suggestions: use 'took' for repeated past actions, include articles where required, and use plural 'pictures' if multiple images were taken.