Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on answering directly with a clear topic sentence. Keep the response concise (1–3 sentences), use correct grammar, and give a relevant reason or brief example. Avoid unclear references and repetitions. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" properly to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by car because I enjoy watching the passing scenery. For example, I like to see trees and buildings go by, which helps me relax during long trips.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear short answer (Yes/No), then give a specific reason and a short example. Use correct verb forms and reduce filler words. Mention safety concerns briefly with a linking word like "however".

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I take photos from the car window when the view is beautiful, because I want to remember interesting places. However, I avoid taking pictures on busy roads since it could distract the driver.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words such as "because" or "but". Avoid repetition and correct word choice ("sea" not "see").

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh, cool air and peaceful walking trails. But I also like the sea for its relaxing views and the chance to swim, so both have different appeals.

× Could Julie not because it is very dangerous if you look outside the window and if the car come, you can stuck in the car both car.

✓ No, Julie could not, because it is very dangerous to look out of the window; if a car comes, you could get stuck between cars.

Multiple sentence structure issues: wrong question/answer form, missing infinitive 'to' after 'dangerous', incorrect verb forms 'come' and 'stuck', and unclear phrase 'both car'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use 'to look out of the window', use conditional 'if a car comes', and correct passive/active verb 'get stuck'. Also use punctuation to separate ideas. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I see money, uh, people that it happened with him like this.

✓ So I saw many people who had experiences like this.

Incorrect verb tense and form: 'see money' should be 'saw many' (plural quantifier and past tense), 'that it happened with him like this' is ungrammatical; use relative clause 'people who had experiences like this'. Suggestion: choose correct quantifier 'many' and past tense 'saw', use 'who' for people and 'had experiences' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, sometimes I take picture outside from the car window when the scenery scenario is beautiful and I it attract me.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take pictures out of the car window when the scenery is beautiful and it attracts me.

Plural noun required: 'picture' should be 'pictures' when speaking generally. Preposition and word order: 'outside from the car window' should be 'out of the car window'. 'Scenery scenario' is redundant; 'scenery' alone is correct. Subject-verb agreement: 'it attract me' should be 'it attracts me'. Suggestion: use plural for habitual actions, correct preposition 'out of', remove redundant word, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:1

× But if the if I arrive in the busy road and a lot of car, it may distract our driver or.

✓ But if I travel on a busy road with many cars, it may distract our driver.

Preposition errors: use 'on' or 'along' for 'on a busy road' not 'in'. Quantifier and plural: 'a lot of car' should be 'many cars'. 'If I arrive in' is odd for being in a moving vehicle; 'if I travel on' or 'when we are on' is better. Removed trailing 'or'. Suggestion: use 'on a busy road' and pluralize nouns and match context to 'travel' or 'when we are'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I I love mountain because the beautiful breeze, pure breeze.

✓ I love the mountains because of the beautiful, pure breeze.

Article and singular/plural issue: 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' or with article 'the mountain'. Also need preposition 'because of' to indicate reason. Comma placement and adjective order: 'beautiful, pure breeze' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'the mountains' when speaking generally and 'because of' for reasons. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But I also always suggest see because see Seaview is very beautiful, very cool and I very enjoy there for different reasons.

✓ But I also always recommend the sea because the sea view is very beautiful and cool, and I really enjoy it there for different reasons.

Pronoun and verb choice: 'suggest see' is incorrect; use 'recommend the sea' or 'suggest going to the sea'. 'see Seaview' has repeated 'see' and wrong capitalization; use 'sea view'. 'I very enjoy there' is ungrammatical; use 'I really enjoy it there'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('recommend', 'enjoy'), proper nouns 'sea view', and pronoun 'it' to refer to the place. Grammar problem type ID:12