Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 사용을 개선하세요. 주어-동사 일치(예: I usually like), 전치사 사용(look at scenery), 불필요한 단어 제거로 답변을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 만드세요. 또한 토픽 문장을 분명히 하고, 연결어(for example, because)로 이유를 덧붙이세요. 예: 한 문장으로 명확한 주제 진술 → 한두 문장으로 구체적 이유 제공.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing natural landscapes. For example, I like watching mountains and forests pass by since it helps me relax.

Gợi ý: 의사 전달이 모호하고 문장 구조가 어색합니다. 간결한 표현으로 직접 답을 말한 후 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 축약형(I'm fine) 사용은 괜찮지만 반복과 불필요한 단어는 제거하세요. 또한 ‘I prefer to enjoy it with my own eyes’ 같은 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos because I prefer to enjoy the view with my own eyes rather than through a camera. Sometimes I take a quick photo if the view is unusual, but mostly I just watch.

Gợi ý: 의견 제시 후 이유를 명확히 하고 문장 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요. 'tend to prefer'나 'I prefer the sea because...'처럼 명확한 주제 문장을 사용하고, 이유는 구체적으로 설명하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복을 피하고 시제 및 동사형을 바로잡으세요.

Ví dụ: I like both, but I prefer the sea because I'm a strong swimmer and I enjoy swimming and water sports. For instance, I often swim for exercise when I visit the seaside.

× I usually likes looking on scenery.

✓ I usually like looking at the scenery.

Subject 'I' requires the base verb form 'like' not 'likes'. Also use preposition 'at' with 'look' and include the article 'the' before 'scenery'. Suggestion: Use 'I usually like' and 'look at the scenery'.

× I usually likes looking on scenery.

✓ I usually like looking at the scenery.

The verb 'look' commonly takes the preposition 'at' to indicate direction of sight; 'on' is incorrect here. Also add 'the' before 'scenery' to specify it. Suggestion: Use 'look at the scenery'.

× The outside.

✓ I mean the scenery outside the window.

'The outside.' is a sentence fragment without a verb or clear structure. It should be expanded into a full clause that connects to the previous idea. Suggestion: Combine with previous sentence: 'I mean the scenery outside the window.'

× I really like the natural scenery and traveling.

✓ I really like the natural scenery and traveling.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no pronoun error. No correction needed. Explanation: Both 'the natural scenery' and 'traveling' are parallel and correct. (Included for completeness.)

× This is in case of different but but I mainly I'm not go I'm not going to take a photo because I wanna see the only my eyes own eyes.

✓ Sometimes it depends, but mainly I'm not going to take a photo because I want to see it with my own eyes.

The original is fragmented and contains colloquial contractions and repetitions. Fixes: 'This is in case of different' is unclear—use 'Sometimes it depends'. Remove duplicate 'but' and the incorrect 'I'm not go'. Use 'want to' instead of 'wanna' in formal correction and 'my own eyes' rather than 'the only my eyes own eyes'. Suggestion: Say 'mainly I'm not going to take a photo because I want to see it with my own eyes.'

× I mainly I'm not go I'm not going to take a photo because I wanna see the only my eyes own eyes.

✓ Mainly, I'm not going to take a photo because I want to see it with my own eyes.

Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to' and correct verb phrase 'I'm not go' to 'I'm not going'. Use modal/auxiliary construction 'going to' correctly. Suggestion: Use 'I'm not going to take a photo'.

× I wanna see the only my eyes own eyes.

✓ I want to see it with my own eyes.

Pronoun and word order are incorrect: 'the only my eyes own eyes' is ungrammatical. Use object 'it' (the scenery) and the phrase 'with my own eyes'. Suggestion: Use 'see it with my own eyes'.

× Both of them I like it, but but I I tend to prepare to see because I like swimming and I'm doing swimming much better.

✓ I like both, but I prefer the sea because I like swimming and I'm better at swimming.

Original mixes subject and object pronouns ('Both of them I like it' is redundant). Use 'I like both' or 'I like both of them' (without 'it'). 'Tend to prepare to see' is unclear; replace with 'prefer'. 'I'm doing swimming much better' should be 'I'm better at swimming'. Suggestion: Say 'I like both, but I prefer the sea because I like swimming and I'm better at swimming.'

× Both of them I like it, but but I I tend to prepare to see because I like swimming and I'm doing swimming much better.

✓ I like both, but I tend to prefer the sea because I like swimming and I'm better at swimming.

Remove redundant pronoun 'it' after 'I like both'. Use 'prefer' instead of awkward 'prepare to see'. 'I'm doing swimming much better' misuses continuous form; use 'I'm better at swimming'. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer the sea' and 'I'm better at swimming'.