Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., 'fund' should be 'find' or 'fond of'), and watch plural/singular forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel. I enjoy watching changing landscapes, such as mountains, volcanoes and coastal views, because they help me remember the journey. For instance, I often notice unusual rock formations or fishing villages along the coast.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a clear main idea and one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases ('speed of the calls' unclear). Use correct expressions like 'when the car is moving fast' and 'out of focus'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos, but it depends on the speed of the vehicle. If the car is moving very fast, pictures usually come out blurry, so I wait until we slow down or stop to take clearer images.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and awkward collocations ('much more better' -> 'much better' or 'prefer the sea'). Avoid irrelevant or unclear details (climbing at midnight needs context).

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains. I enjoy the beach, sunshine and coastal views, and I find seaside holidays more relaxing. In contrast, I remember a difficult midnight mountain climb once, which makes me less keen on mountain trips.

× Of course I do, because on the trip I think one of the most important and significant thing is to fund and to remember the different views and landscape along the trip.

✓ Of course I do, because on a trip I think one of the most important and significant things is to find and remember the different views and landscapes along the trip.

Errors: 'the trip' should be 'a trip' for general reference (article error, ID 22), 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'one of the' (singular and plural issue, ID 1), 'fund' is incorrect word choice and should be 'find' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs / word choice, ID 13), and 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'different'. Suggestion: use correct article 'a', pluralize 'things' and 'landscapes', and replace 'fund' with 'find'.

× Sometimes when I look out the window I can see different sceneries such as mountains and volcanoes or sometimes the best coastline.

✓ Sometimes when I look out the window I can see different scenery such as mountains, volcanoes, or sometimes a beautiful coastline.

Errors: 'sceneries' is uncountable and should be 'scenery' (singular/plural issue, ID 1), 'the best coastline' awkward and incorrect article usage—use 'a beautiful coastline' (article error, ID 22 and incorrect use of adjectives, ID 13). Suggestion: use uncountable 'scenery', add commas for lists and choose appropriate adjective 'beautiful'.

× Yes, of course, but that all depends, because sometimes when the speed of the calls they're too fast, it's hard to take clear photos.

✓ Yes, of course, but it all depends, because sometimes when the speed of the car is too high, it's hard to take clear photos.

Errors: 'that all depends' is acceptable but 'it all depends' is more natural (sentence structure, ID 26); 'the speed of the calls they're too fast' contains multiple mistakes: 'calls' should be 'car' (word choice/pronoun error, ID 12), 'they're' incorrect agreement—use 'is' for 'speed' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestion: replace with 'it all depends' and 'when the speed of the car is too high'.

× For example, if the car's speed is too high, the photo may be not in focus and the scenery will be not as much beautiful as I say.

✓ For example, if the car's speed is too high, the photo may not be in focus and the scenery may not be as beautiful as I described.

Errors: word order 'may be not' should be 'may not be' (incorrect adverb placement, ID 20), 'will be not' should be 'may not be' for possibility and naturalness (future/modal issue, ID 7/4), 'as much beautiful' is incorrect comparison—use 'as beautiful' or 'as beautiful as I described' (comparative error, ID 25). Suggestion: place 'not' before the verb, use 'may' for possibility, and correct comparative structure to 'as beautiful'.

× Well, I think both are right, but I prefer seeing much more than mountains because I like the coastline, I like the beach, I like the sunshine among the sea.

✓ Well, I think both are fine, but I prefer the sea much more than the mountains because I like the coastline, the beach, and the sunshine by the sea.

Errors: 'both are right' is unnatural—use 'both are fine' or 'both are nice' (sentence structure, ID 26), 'I prefer seeing much more than mountains' is ungrammatical—correct comparative structure 'I prefer the sea much more than the mountains' (comparison error, ID 25), 'among the sea' is incorrect preposition—use 'by the sea' or 'at sea' (preposition error, ID 11). Suggestion: use parallel nouns and correct prepositions for natural phrasing.

× But in the mountains I often link it to the memory I have to climb the mountains in the midnight.

✓ But in the mountains I often associate them with the memory I have of climbing the mountains at midnight.

Errors: 'link it to the memory' uses wrong pronoun/object—should associate 'mountains' with 'them' (pronoun error, ID 12), 'I have to climb' incorrectly suggests obligation—should be 'I have of climbing' or 'of when I climbed' (verb form/past participle issue, ID 9), 'in the midnight' wrong article and preposition—use 'at midnight' (preposition/article errors, ID 11 and 22). Suggestion: use 'associate', correct pronoun reference, and use 'of climbing' or past tense 'when I climbed' plus 'at midnight'.

× It's really hard to me.

✓ It was really hard for me.

Errors: 'hard to me' uses wrong preposition—use 'hard for me' (preposition error, ID 11), tense mismatch: if referring to a past experience use past tense 'was' (past tense issue, ID 5). Suggestion: use 'It was really hard for me' when describing a past difficulty.

× So I prefer sea much more better.

✓ So I prefer the sea much more.

Errors: 'much more better' is a double comparative—'more' and 'better' cannot be combined (comparative/superlative error, ID 25), missing article 'the sea' (article error, ID 22). Suggestion: use 'prefer the sea much more' or 'prefer the sea much more than the mountains'.