Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and tighten your response: begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and small grammar errors, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Focus on correct tense and article use (e.g., 'the same day' is unclear; use 'every time' or 'often').

Ví dụ: Yes. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, when I commute to university in another city, I always choose a window seat so I can watch the farmland and hills pass by. This quiet time makes the journey more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Remove filler words and correct repetition and grammar: state the habit, give a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and choose correct verb forms and articles ('a picture', 'the countryside').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos through the car window, especially when I travel to the countryside. For example, I like to photograph golden fields and old houses because the images help me remember the trip. This also lets me share highlights with my family later.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give concise, specific reasons and contrast with the sea using a linking phrase. Correct small grammar issues (use 'born and raised in the mountains', 'I've never been to the sea or a beach'). Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I was born and raised in the mountains and love their scale and snowy peaks. However, I have never been to the sea, so I would like to try a beach holiday someday to experience the different scenery.

× I do look out the window at the same day when traveling by the bus or car.

✓ I look out the window every day when traveling by bus or car.

Use simple present for habitual actions and correct time expression: 'every day' not 'the same day'. Also omit 'do' unless for emphasis and remove article before 'bus' and 'car' when speaking generally.

× Actually I'm studying in another city and I travel a lot by bus.

✓ Actually I'm studying in another city, and I travel a lot by bus.

Add a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses; sentence is otherwise correct. No article is needed before 'bus' when speaking generally.

× I always prefer window seats because it just makes me calm and relaxed by looking out at the landscape at the field.

✓ I always prefer window seats because they make me calm and relaxed when I look out at the landscape in the fields.

Referent 'window seats' is plural so use 'they' and plural verb 'make'. Use 'when' for time clause, and 'in the fields' is the correct prepositional phrase rather than 'at the field'. 'It just' was incorrect for plural subject.

× Yes, I often take photos of the scenery out outside the car window, especially when I when I'm travelling, head to countryside.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I'm traveling to the countryside.

Remove redundancy 'out outside' and duplicate 'when'. Use 'traveling to the countryside' for correct verb and preposition order. Also use 'countryside' with 'the'.

× I just love to take picture.

✓ I just love to take pictures.

Use plural 'pictures' after 'take' because 'take a picture' or 'take pictures' are the correct collocations; here general meaning requires plural.

× Capturing those moments helps me remind my trip.

✓ Capturing those moments helps me remember my trip.

Use the verb 'remember' after 'helps me' not 'remind' (which is transitive and would require an object: 'remind me of my trip'). Use base form 'remember' after 'helps me'.

× Honestly I've never been to sea or beach but I think it will be great whenever I get a chance to travel.

✓ Honestly, I've never been to the sea or to a beach, but I think it will be great whenever I get the chance to travel.

Include articles 'the sea' and 'a beach' for specific nouns. Add comma after 'Honestly'. Use 'get the chance' as a common expression. Sentence tense is fine (present perfect for life experience) and future modal 'will' fits.

× I always prefer mountains over the sea because I'm born and raised on a mountain and I just love those huge mountains, especially covered with the snow.

✓ I always prefer the mountains to the sea because I was born and raised on a mountain, and I just love those huge mountains, especially when they're covered with snow.

Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'over'. Use past tense 'was born and raised' for completed life events. Add 'the' before 'mountains' when speaking generally here. 'Covered with snow' needs a clause 'when they're covered with snow' for clarity and use 'snow' without 'the'.