Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., "when I travel", "the scenery", "the fresh air"). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus, car or train because I enjoy the scenery. For example, I like to watch trees and hills pass by, and I appreciate the fresh, cool air when windows are open.

Gợi ý: Give a clear short answer followed by specific reasons and a brief example. Improve vocabulary and sentence structure (e.g., "nature lover", "landscapes"). Use linking words such as "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "as I see" and "kind of like".

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I am a nature lover and enjoy capturing landscapes. For example, I like to photograph forests and rivers to remember the view and share it with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Fix grammar: use "both", "I like both", "I prefer the mountains", and correct noun forms (e.g., "there is so much nature", "go to the mountains"). Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy peaceful hiking and the variety of plants and wildlife. For example, I love walking forest trails and looking at different trees and flowers, which I find more relaxing than busy beaches.

× Yes, I do look out the window at the scenery when I traveling by bus, car or train because I like to enjoy nature trees and also I like to feel air like a cold air. So yes I like to look out the windows when I travel by first car or train.

✓ Yes, I do look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus, car, or train because I like to enjoy the trees and feel the air, especially cold air. So yes, I like to look out the windows when I travel by car or train.

The clause 'when I traveling' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous form; use 'when I am traveling'. Also 'nature trees' is incorrect word order and collocation; use 'the trees' or 'nature' separately. 'Feel air like a cold air' is ungrammatical; say 'feel the air, especially cold air'. 'First car or train' is unclear and likely incorrect; use 'car or train'. Suggestions: include the appropriate auxiliary for present participle verbs, use correct article/noun collocation, and simplify phrasing for clarity.

× Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car windows because as I see, I like nature views, kind of like trees, fresh air, different kinds of nature. I am a nature level so I like to take photos of different landscape of scenery.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like natural views, such as trees, fresh air, and different kinds of landscapes. I am a nature lover, so I like to take photos of different landscapes.

Errors: 'car windows' can be singular 'car window' when referring to the view from a car; both are possible but singular is more natural here. 'Nature views' should be 'natural views'. 'Different kinds of nature' is vague; 'different kinds of landscapes' is clearer. 'Nature level' is a typo for 'nature lover'. 'Different landscape of scenery' has incorrect noun forms and order; use 'different landscapes'. Suggestions: use correct noun forms and collocations, and correct typographical errors.

× Mountain and sea both of them I like it but if I have to choose one I always choose mountains because mountains are look good and I always enjoy to see mountains because there are so many nature. I am a nature lover so I like to prefer to go mountains.

✓ I like both the mountains and the sea, but if I have to choose, I always choose the mountains because they look beautiful and I always enjoy seeing them because there is so much nature. I am a nature lover, so I prefer to go to the mountains.

Multiple structure issues: 'Mountain and sea both of them I like it' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I like both the mountains and the sea'. 'Mountains are look good' mixes forms; use 'they look beautiful' or 'the mountains look good'. 'Enjoy to see mountains' should be 'enjoy seeing the mountains' (verb + -ing). 'There are so many nature' is ungrammatical; say 'there is so much nature' or 'there is a lot of natural scenery'. 'Like to prefer to go mountains' is redundant and missing preposition; use 'prefer to go to the mountains'. Suggestions: simplify sentence structure, ensure correct verb forms (enjoy + -ing), use correct pronouns and prepositions, and avoid redundant words like 'like to prefer'.