Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do / No, I don't), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g. say “I prefer the window seat” and “it’s beautiful to see the scenery”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I always prefer the window seat because I enjoy seeing the whole environment and beautiful scenery. For example, I like watching trees and houses pass by, which makes the journey more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct response and organize the idea with linking words. Say how often you take photos, why you do it, and what you do with the photos. Remove filler words and repetitions, and use correct tense and simple connectors like “when” or “after.”

Ví dụ: Sometimes I take photos of the view from my phone when I see something interesting. Then, when I have free time, I look back at the pictures to remember the scene and the mood of the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific, coherent reasons with correct vocabulary. Start with a clear statement (I prefer the sea), then give two specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid unclear phrases and filler sounds. Use correct nouns (e.g. “beach,” “watching”), and clearer descriptions (e.g. “the sound of the waves”).

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love coastal areas and relaxing by the beach. For example, I enjoy watching the sunrise and sunset over the water and listening to the sound of the waves, which helps me feel calm.

× 'I always prefer to see the window side seat and it's a very beautiful to show the whole environment and the beautiful scenery and I always prefer it.'

✓ 'I always prefer a window-side seat because it gives a very beautiful view of the whole area and the scenery.'

'Errors: missing and incorrect articles (a/the), awkward noun forms and redundancy. Explanation: use the indefinite article "a" with singular countable noun "window-side seat". Replace "it's a very beautiful to show" with "it gives a very beautiful view" and remove repeated "I always prefer it" to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: say "I always prefer a window-side seat because it gives a very beautiful view of the whole area and the scenery.'

× 'Sometimes I capture the scenery on my phone and after free time after after I get free time, I'll. I see it on my phone and, uh, feel the scenery.'

✓ 'Sometimes I take photos of the scenery on my phone, and when I have free time I look at them and remember the scene.'

'Errors: fragmented and repetitive structure, incorrect word choice (capture -> take photos), extraneous fillers and incomplete clause ("I'll."). Explanation: restructure into two clear clauses connected by a conjunction: describe action (take photos) and later action (look at them when free). Suggestion: use "take photos" or "take pictures", avoid repeating "after free time", and finish clauses clearly.'

× 'I always prefer sea because umm it's coastal. I like coastal area and the bed tracking sunset and sunrise. I also enjoy the whispering of umm sea and the beautiful air wave.'

✓ 'I always prefer the sea because I like coastal areas and watching the sunrise and sunset. I also enjoy the sound of the sea and the fresh sea air.'

'Errors: missing definite article before "sea" and incorrect noun phrases and word choice ("bed tracking" is incorrect, "air wave" is wrong). Explanation: use "the sea" when speaking generally about the sea in a preference. Use plural "coastal areas" for generality, use "watching the sunrise and sunset" instead of "bed tracking", and use "sound of the sea" and "fresh sea air" for natural expressions. Suggestion: use correct collocations (watching sunrise/sunset, the sea, sea air).'}]} Шьุตบอล%INVALID_TOKEN%