Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, chia động từ), trật tự từ và lựa chọn từ chính xác. Trả lời nên ngắn gọn, có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó là một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể liên kết bằng từ nối (ví dụ: because, so, for example). Tránh câu dài lủng củng và lỗi phát âm/viết như “sit” thay vì “sit near”, “going a car” thay vì “going by car”.

Ví dụ: I usually sit near the window when I travel by car because I enjoy watching parks and animals outside. For example, last week I saw a family of ducks by a small lake, which made the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: Cần dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác (ví dụ: "It's my hobby" hoặc "It's one of my hobbies") và chọn từ phù hợp ("photo" thay vì "image" có thể tự nhiên hơn ở ngữ cảnh này). Nên chia câu hợp lý: một câu chủ đề + một câu giải thích/ ví dụ, dùng từ nối như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý. Tránh cách diễn đạt mơ hồ như "box it in my Facebook account."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful scenes outside the window because I like to look back at them later. For example, I usually save the best pictures on my phone and sometimes upload them to Facebook so my friends can see them.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng ("I prefer the sea"), sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (tráng "see more than Martin" — không rõ nghĩa; "made me fall" sai ý). Dùng một câu chủ đề và một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể, liên kết bằng "because" hoặc "so" để giải thích lý do. Tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt khiến câu bị sai cấu trúc.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because the blue water and soft sand help me relax. For example, walking along the beach and listening to the waves makes me feel calm after a busy week.

× Personally, I'm the type of person who sit nearly the window when I'm going a car of best because at that time I can see outside the window is absent away about a park or animals, something like that, and it's very, very interesting.

✓ Personally, I'm the type of person who sits near the window when I'm going by car because at that time I can see outside the window, such as a park or animals, and it's very, very interesting.

The original sentence has multiple issues: subject-verb agreement 'who sit' should be 'who sits' because the relative clause refers to 'the type of person' (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'Nearly the window' is incorrect preposition/word choice; use 'near the window' (ID 11). 'I'm going a car of best' is ungrammatical; correct to 'going by car' (ID 11 and 26). The clause 'I can see outside the window is absent away about a park or animals' is incoherent; correct to 'I can see outside the window, such as a park or animals' and use a comma for clarity (ID 26). Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, use correct prepositions ('near', 'by'), and simplify phrasing to concrete examples like 'such as'.

× When I see a beautiful image I always capture it and save it in my phone to see it again or box it in my Facebook account or something like that.

✓ When I see a beautiful scene I always capture it and save it on my phone to look at again or post it on my Facebook account.

Problems: 'image' is not wrong but 'scene' fits scenery better (style); 'save it in my phone' should be 'on my phone' (preposition error, ID 11). 'to see it again' is acceptable but 'to look at again' is more natural (style). 'box it in my Facebook account' is incorrect verb choice; use 'post it on my Facebook account' (ID 26). Also 'It's my hobbies.' should be corrected separately (see next). Suggestions: use natural verbs for digital actions ('capture', 'save on', 'post on') and correct prepositions.

× It's my hobbies.

✓ It's my hobby.

'Hobby' is a singular noun when referring to one activity; the phrase 'It's my hobbies' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'hobbies' (Grammar problem type ID 1 and ID 12). Use 'It's my hobby' or 'They are my hobbies' depending on meaning. Suggestion: maintain number agreement between subject and noun.

× Personally, I prefer to see more than Martin because when I see a blue color of the sea and run on the sand, it made me fall, feel very comfortable and help me relax.

✓ Personally, I prefer the sea more than the mountains because when I see the blue sea and run on the sand, I feel very comfortable and relaxed, and it helps me relax.

Multiple issues: 'prefer to see more than Martin' is likely intended to contrast 'mountains' and 'sea' — 'Martin' is incorrect word choice (ID 26). Use 'prefer the sea more than the mountains' or 'prefer the sea' (ID 26). 'a blue color of the sea' should be 'the blue sea' (article/adjective order, ID 17 and ID 18). 'and run on the sand, it made me fall' mixes tenses and causes confusion; use present tense consistent with preference: 'and run on the sand, I feel very comfortable' (present tense, ID 6). 'made me fall' is wrong meaning; omit or correct if intended. 'help me relax' should be 'it helps me relax' for subject-verb agreement (ID 27 and ID 6). Suggestions: use correct nouns, keep tense consistent, and ensure subject-verb agreement.