Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer to typing because I think it's very convenient and it's more quiet than a more quickly than handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Hmm, you're really I I type on a desktop every day because I think that this is can hold, hold my hands and it's convenient.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I remember that maybe in my, as a teenager in, uh, prim primary school, because in this pre, in this time have this, you know, digital and, uh, computer skill is, uh, cause safe.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Uh, my dad is very interested in uh, different kinds of computer or keyboard, so I have so many chance to improve my typing yearly he teach me and uh, I exercised by myself.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了偏好,但语法错误多,句子不连贯,信息重复且不具体。提高建议: 1) 修正语法(例如主谓一致、比较结构)并简洁地给出理由; 2) 使用连词连接观点和细节(because / and / so); 3) 给出具体例子说明“方便”或“更安静”的原因(如编辑、存储或速度)。 练习方法:先写出主题句,再补充一到两句具体原因与例子,句子总数不超过5句。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can easily edit and save documents on my computer, which saves time. It is also quieter when I type on a laptop in a library, so I don’t disturb others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有停顿与重复,语法和用词不准确(“can hold my hands”不自然)。提高建议: 1) 直接回答并给出明确原因; 2) 避免填充词和重复,保持句子流畅; 3) 用具体细节说明“方便”的方面(如屏幕大、键盘舒适)。 练习方法:先说一句肯定句,再用一到两句解释并给出具体细节或对比。
Ví dụ: I type on a desktop every day because I prefer the larger screen and the full-size keyboard. The keys are more comfortable for long typing sessions, and the monitor makes it easier to see multiple windows.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 答案不清楚且语法混乱,时间表达不准确,存在很多犹豫词。提高建议: 1) 明确给出时间点(例如“when I was a child/at primary school/teenager”); 2) 用一两句话交代学习背景或原因,避免无意义词汇; 3) 使用连词使陈述更连贯。 练习方法:先给出清晰时间,再补充学习环境或原因,语言要简洁。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around the age of ten. At that time our school had computer lessons, so I had regular practice and gradually improved my skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答有内容但表达不流畅,时态和句子结构需改进。提高建议: 1) 去除犹豫词,调整语序和时态; 2) 更具体地描述改进方法(如练习软件、每天练习时长、参加课程); 3) 使用连词使句子连贯。 练习方法:列出一两个具体方法,再说明频率和效果。
Ví dụ: My dad taught me at home because he is interested in keyboards, and I also practice on my own. For example, I use online typing exercises for 20 minutes each day, which has helped me increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer to typing because I think it's very convenient and it's more quiet than a more quickly than handwriting.
✓ I prefer typing because I think it's very convenient and it's quieter and faster than handwriting.
本句中“prefer to typing”是不正确的搭配。动词“prefer”后可接动名词(prefer doing)或不带 to 的不定式(prefer to do),但不能是“to + 动名词”。此外,比较级使用错误:应使用“quieter”和“faster”分别比较安静和速度,并去掉多余的“a more”或重复的“than”。建议记住常见搭配:prefer doing 或 prefer to do;比较级形容词直接加 -er(或用 more + 形容词)。
× Hmm, you're really I I type on a desktop every day because I think that this is can hold, hold my hands and it's convenient.
✓ I type on a desktop every day because I think it can support my hands and it's convenient.
原句有重复("I I")、断句混乱和不正确的结构("this is can hold")。需要去掉多余的词并重构句子:将人称和谓语对齐,使用正确的情态和动词搭配(it can support my hands)。建议练习简洁表达,确保主语和谓语一致,避免重复。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / I remember that maybe in my, as a teenager in, uh, prim primary school, because in this pre, in this time have this, you know, digital and, uh, computer skill is, uh, cause safe.
✓ I think I learned when I was a teenager in primary school, because at that time we had digital classes and learned computer skills.
回答涉及过去发生的动作,应使用一般过去时,所以用 learned 而不是 learn 或其他形式。原句词序混乱且有不必要的重复("prim primary"、"in this pre, in this time"),并且缺少合适的介词搭配(应为 "at that time")。建议熟练使用过去时叙述过去经历,并用简洁句子替代口语填充词。
× Uh, my dad is very interested in uh, different kinds of computer or keyboard, so I have so many chance to improve my typing yearly he teach me and uh, I exercised by myself.
✓ My dad is very interested in different kinds of computers and keyboards, so I have had many chances to improve my typing. He teaches me and I also practiced by myself.
原句中名词复数与冠词使用不当:"different kinds of computer or keyboard" 应使用复数 computers and keyboards。"so many chance" 应为複数形式 chances。时态也需一致:父亲持续教导用现在时或现在完成时表达长期影响(have had many chances)。此外句子缺少连词,需拆分为两句以提高可读性。建议注意可数名词的单复数和相应冠词,以及时态一致性。