Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Personally, I prefer typing rather than handwriting because you know when I can, umm, type. Any work on my laptop or my phone is so convenient and useful to umm, correct the wrong 1. So yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I would say that I only use my hand and my fingers to laptop keyboard because it's so very useful for me and I use for my assignment in my university, so it's so convenient.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Oh, if my marriage stop is dry, uh, in my young age, my teacher at my secondary school has taught me how to type on the keyboard, uh, quickly. And I, umm, and I can take it become my habit. So it's so easily too tight for me.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
So I will say that I usually, uh, surfing on the Internet to find a website to practice is, uh, so that our website can help me, uh, remember the work or, umm, type quickly, uh, than before. So if I so fun to type in.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Tránh tiếng ừ, umm và cụm từ không rõ ràng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và kết luận ngắn. Giữ tối đa 3 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Ví dụ hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác như “edit”, “convenient” và “faster”.
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit on a laptop or phone. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and format documents without rewriting them. This makes my study and work much more efficient.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp (desktop hoặc laptop), tránh lặp và ngữ pháp sai. Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau là một lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, chuẩn xác (e.g., “I use a laptop because…”).
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I find it portable and convenient for doing university assignments. The laptop lets me work anywhere on campus and saves time compared with desktop setups.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp. Trả lời bằng cách nêu thời điểm (e.g., “when I was at secondary school”), sau đó mô tả ngắn cách học và kết quả (thành thạo/thói quen). Giữ cấu trúc rõ ràng và ít lỗi.
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at secondary school; my teacher showed us proper finger placement and practice exercises. After regular practice, it became a habit and now typing feels effortless for me.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Nói rõ phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (ví dụ: dùng trang luyện gõ, luyện tốc độ, bài tập ngón), tránh các cụm từ mơ hồ. Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (e.g., “by”, “so”, “therefore”). Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích.
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using online typing websites and daily practice exercises that focus on accuracy and speed. By doing short timed drills and following proper finger placement, I gradually increase my speed and make fewer mistakes.
× I would say that I only use my hand and my fingers to laptop keyboard because it's so very useful for me and I use for my assignment in my university, so it's so convenient.
✓ I would say that I only use my hands and my fingers on the laptop keyboard because it's very useful for me and I use it for my assignments at university, so it's very convenient.
Student used singular 'hand' and incorrect preposition 'to' and omitted object pronoun 'it'. Recommendations: use plural 'hands' for both hands, use preposition 'on' with 'keyboard', use object pronoun 'it' to refer to 'laptop', pluralize 'assignments', and use 'at university' for place. Grammar problem type ID:12
× Personally, I prefer typing rather than handwriting because you know when I can, umm, type. Any work on my laptop or my phone is so convenient and useful to umm, correct the wrong 1. So yeah.
✓ Personally, I prefer typing to handwriting because when I can type, any work on my laptop or my phone is very convenient and useful for correcting mistakes.
Student used awkward comparative 'prefer X rather than Y' and incorrect fragment 'correct the wrong 1'. Recommendations: use 'prefer ... to ...', remove fillers, change 'correct the wrong' to 'correcting mistakes', and maintain present simple since preference is general. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Oh, if my marriage stop is dry, uh, in my young age, my teacher at my secondary school has taught me how to type on the keyboard, uh, quickly.
✓ When I was young, my teacher at secondary school taught me how to type quickly on the keyboard.
Student used incorrect phrases and present perfect 'has taught' with a past time expression. Recommendations: use past simple 'taught' for completed past actions, use 'When I was young' for time, and place adverb 'quickly' after verb or before 'on the keyboard'. Grammar problem type ID:5
× And I, umm, and I can take it become my habit.
✓ And it became a habit for me.
Student produced ungrammatical structure 'can take it become'. Recommendation: use simple past 'became' or present perfect 'has become' to show change; keep subject concise. Grammar problem type ID:26
× So it's so easily too tight for me.
✓ So it's also very easy for me.
Student misused adverbs/adjectives: 'easily' (adverb) and 'too tight' (idiomatically wrong). Recommendation: use adjective 'easy' with 'very' and adverb placement 'very easy for me' to express ease. Grammar problem type ID:13
× So I will say that I usually, uh, surfing on the Internet to find a website to practice is, uh, so that our website can help me, uh, remember the work or, umm, type quickly, uh, than before.
✓ I would say that I usually surf the Internet to find websites to practice so that these sites can help me remember the exercises and type more quickly than before.
Student mixed tenses and used gerund 'surfing' incorrectly after auxiliary 'will say that I usually'. Recommendations: use base verb 'surf' with adverb 'usually', pluralize 'websites', use 'so that' plus clause, and compare with 'more quickly than before'. Grammar problem type ID:8
× So if I so fun to type in.
✓ I find typing very enjoyable.
Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Recommendation: use clear subject-verb-object structure 'I find typing enjoyable' or 'I enjoy typing', and avoid filler words. Grammar problem type ID:26