Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Own Apple. I'll actually prepare for the typing because you know, the social media is popular and now so we always do the typing to send a message to our friend, our family. So I prefer the typing as well.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Actually, I have on the laptop every day because you know, I'm still I'm student, I need to write the essay or doing the homework on the laptop, so I always type off the laptop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, I think actually it's in my primary school because, uh, I don't have a phone, uh, when I was young. So when I get the first phone on the primary school, so I try to learn how to type in and send a message to my friend and family. And this is a hard, like, it's an interesting experience. You learn how to type in. Yeah.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
You know, how can I improve my typing? It's actually like a study. Like you're reading. You want to, uh, improve your reading so you'll read more books. It's actually the same, right? We want to improve your typing skill so you can type more work.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接切入主题并保持简洁,避免不必要的口语填充词(如“you know”)。可以先给出明确观点,然后用1-2句具体原因支持,使用连词使表达更连贯。注意语法(例如主语一致、时态)和词汇选择(如使用 'prefer typing to handwriting')。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient for communicating on social media. For example, I can quickly message friends and family and edit my text easily when using a phone or laptop.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要先给出直接回答(desktop or laptop),然后用1-2句说明原因并注意语法(如 'I am a student','I need to write essays and do homework')。减少口头禅并使用连接词(because, so)来增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because I am a student and I need to write essays and complete homework. Therefore, the laptop is more portable and convenient for studying.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁明了,先给出时间点,然后提供具体细节说明学习过程。避免重复和犹豫语气,注意过去时态(learned)和词语搭配('my first phone','primary school')。可加入一两个具体例子或感受以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school after I got my first phone. At first it was difficult, but I practised by sending messages to my friends and family until I became faster and more confident.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明你改进打字的方法,给出具体可执行的策略(例如练习打字软件、定期练习、正确手指放置、参加课程)。使用逻辑连接词并避免泛泛而谈。句子要简短准确,控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing tutors and exercises. I also use proper finger placement and set aside 15–20 minutes each day to type passages to increase speed and accuracy.
× Own Apple. I'll actually prepare for the typing because you know, the social media is popular and now so we always do the typing to send a message to our friend, our family. So I prefer the typing as well.
✓ I own an Apple device. I'll actually prepare for typing because social media is popular now, so we usually type to send messages to our friends and family. So I prefer typing as well.
句子结构混乱且有多处小错误: 1) “Own Apple.” 缺主语和冠词,正确应为“I own an Apple device.”(“我有一台苹果设备”)。 2) “prepare for the typing” 用法不自然,应直接说“prepare for typing”或“I prefer typing”。 3) “the social media is popular and now so we always do the typing” 语序和连接词错误,应为“social media is popular now, so we usually type”。 4) “send a message to our friend, our family” 单复数和冠词不当,应为“send messages to our friends and family”。 建议:写句子时先明确主语+谓语,注意冠词使用和名词单复数,用简单连词(so, because)连接原因与结果,避免重复冗余。
× Actually, I have on the laptop every day because you know, I'm still I'm student, I need to write the essay or doing the homework on the laptop, so I always type off the laptop.
✓ Actually, I use my laptop every day because, you know, I'm still a student. I need to write essays or do homework on the laptop, so I always type on the laptop.
存在多项语法问题: 1) “I have on the laptop every day” 用词不当,正确为“I use my laptop every day”。 2) “I'm still I'm student” 缺不定冠词且重复,应为“I'm still a student”。 3) “write the essay or doing the homework” 时态和结构不一致,应并列不定式或动词原形:“write essays or do homework”。 4) “type off the laptop” 介词错误,应为“type on the laptop”。 建议:注意动词搭配(use a laptop/ type on a keyboard),保持并列结构的一致形式(write or do),记住可数名词在单数前需冠词。
× Umm, I think actually it's in my primary school because, uh, I don't have a phone, uh, when I was young. So when I get the first phone on the primary school, so I try to learn how to type in and send a message to my friend and family. And this is a hard, like, it's an interesting experience. You learn how to type in. Yeah.
✓ Umm, I think I actually learned in primary school because I didn't have a phone when I was young. So when I got my first phone in primary school, I tried to learn how to type and send messages to my friends and family. It was a hard but interesting experience. I learned how to type then.
主要为时态和动词形式错误: 1) 叙述过去经历应使用过去时,“it's in my primary school” 应为“I learned in primary school”。 2) “I don't have a phone when I was young” 时态不一致,应为“I didn't have a phone when I was young”。 3) “when I get the first phone” 应用过去式“got”。 4) “I try to learn” 过去经历用过去式“tried”,并且“type in” 不自然,应为“type”。 5) “send a message to my friend and family” 单复数和冠词需调整为“send messages to my friends and family”。 6) “This is a hard, like, it's an interesting experience. You learn how to type in.” 时态应统一为过去时并语言连贯:"It was a hard but interesting experience. I learned how to type then." 建议:叙述过去事件时整个段落保持过去时,用一致的动词形式,注意可数名词复数形式和固定表达(learned, got, tried)。
× You know, how can I improve my typing? It's actually like a study. Like you're reading. You want to, uh, improve your reading so you'll read more books. It's actually the same, right? We want to improve your typing skill so you can type more work.
✓ You know, how can I improve my typing? It's actually like studying, like reading: if you want to improve your reading, you'll read more books. It's actually the same, right? If we want to improve our typing skills, we should practice typing more.
存在动名词和动词形式使用不当: 1) “like a study. Like you're reading.” 不自然,改为“like studying, like reading” 表示类比时用动名词更合适。 2) “We want to improve your typing skill” 人称不一致且“typing skill”常用复数“typing skills”,建议改为“If we want to improve our typing skills, we should practice typing more.” 3) “so you can type more work” 表达不准确,改为“practice typing more”或“type more”。 建议:在比较类比时使用动名词(studying, reading);注意人称一致(our vs your);使用自然搭配(improve your typing skills / practice typing)。