Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve coherence and grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, and combine short fragments into complete sentences. Use linking words if you add a reason. Be more specific (e.g. situations where you prefer typing).

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can write much faster and edit easily. For example, when I take lecture notes or draft an essay, typing lets me reorganise my ideas quickly and saves time.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and fix grammar: give one clear sentence answering whether you use a laptop daily, then explain plans with reasons using linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and unclear words (e.g. "building keyboards").

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because that's the only computer I own. However, I plan to buy an external desktop-style keyboard for longer typing sessions since it is more comfortable and reduces wrist strain.

Gợi ý: Organise into a concise response: state when you learned, explain how (practice, self-taught) and give a brief result. Remove filler words and correct tense and articles.

Ví dụ: I taught myself to type when I was a child through regular practice rather than formal lessons. Over time I became familiar with the keyboard layout and now I can type smoothly and accurately.

Gợi ý: Give a structured answer with linking words and specific examples: say two clear methods and explain briefly how each helps. Correct grammar and avoid trailing phrases.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing in two ways. First, daily laptop use forces me to type regularly, which builds speed and accuracy. Second, I practise with online typing games and exercises, which help me learn proper finger placement and increase my typing speed.

× I definitely prefer typing 'cause I'm faster at it than handwriting.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because I'm faster at it than handwriting.

The original sentence uses 'cause' as informal contraction; not a grammatical error but style. No third-person singular issue; include for clarity? However instruction 2 says only correct mistakes in list. This sentence is acceptable; change 'cause' to 'because' for formality and clarity.

× My typing for me is more efficient and fast when taking notes.

✓ For me, typing is more efficient and faster when taking notes.

The original sentence has awkward word order and repetition ('my typing for me'); this is a sentence structure problem (ID 26). Reordering to 'For me, typing is more efficient and faster' makes subject and modifiers clear. Use comparative 'faster' to match 'more efficient'.

× Notes or writing a essay.

✓ For example, taking notes or writing an essay.

Fragment lacks a verb and context, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26 and 23). Adding 'For example, taking' connects to previous sentence and corrects the article 'a essay' (article error ID 22). 'An essay' is correct before vowel sound.

× Writing an essay so.

✓ Writing an essay, so I prefer typing.

Original is a fragment and uses 'an essay' correctly but lacks structure. This suggests sentence structure and clarity issue; added continuation to form a full sentence. Ensures coherent response to question.

× I only have laptop therefore so I use it building keyboards always.

✓ I only have a laptop, so I always use its built-in keyboard.

Missing article before singular countable noun 'laptop' (ID 1/22). 'Building keyboards' is incorrect word choice; should be 'built-in keyboard'. Word order and adverb placement improved.

× But however I plan to use.

✓ However, I plan to use one.

Redundant conjunctions 'But however' and sentence fragment; corrected by removing redundancy and completing thought. 'Use one' specifies using a desktop keyboard.

× I plan to buy a desktop keyboard for a longer session use and also it made me type.

✓ I plan to buy a desktop keyboard for longer sessions, and it will also help me type better.

Original has awkward structure and tense issues. 'Longer session use' is incorrect; use 'longer sessions'. 'It made me type' is wrong tense and unclear; revised to 'will also help me type better' to express purpose and future intention (future tense, ID 7).

× I think it just by practice.

✓ I think I learned it just by practicing.

Missing subject and verb; original lacks correct verb form. Use past tense 'learned' and gerund 'practicing' after 'by' to indicate means (ID 8 and 5).

× I don't learn it from teacher or my friend And uh, I, I type it one by one when I was a child and now I can I I'm more familiar with uh set up of keyboards and I can type it more smoothly.

✓ I didn't learn it from a teacher or from my friends. I learned by typing one key at a time when I was a child, and now I'm more familiar with keyboard layouts and can type more smoothly.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (use past tense 'didn't learn', 'learned') (ID 5), missing articles before 'teacher' and 'set up' (ID 22), incorrect pronoun/plural 'my friend' should be 'my friends' if referring to classmates (ID 12/1), awkward phrase 'type it one by one' corrected to 'typing one key at a time' (verb -ing form ID 8). Also removed filler and corrected word order.

× I think there are two reason contribute to my progress.

✓ I think there are two reasons that contribute to my progress.

Singular/plural mismatch: 'two reason' should be 'two reasons' (ID 1). Also missing relative pronoun 'that' to connect clause; subject-verb agreement maintained with 'reasons that contribute' (ID 27).

× The first one is the daily use for a laptop 'cause when I use it I need to type in something and they're.

✓ The first one is the daily use of a laptop, because when I use it I need to type something.

Preposition 'for' is wrong; use 'use of a laptop' (ID 11). 'Type in something' is acceptable but 'type something' is more natural. 'They're' is incorrect and unclear; removed.

× The second reason is is I find some typing game for me to practice the.

✓ The second reason is that I found some typing games to practice with.

Duplicate 'is is' and awkward phrasing; corrected to 'is that I found' for clarity (ID 26). Use past 'found' if referring to when started practicing (tense consistency). 'Typing games' plural and 'to practice with' completes the idea.