Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because I think the typing is suitable for me, but the handwriting is very difficult for me because my handwriting are very ugly. But if I use this phone to type in, I think it's very fast and very.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I use the laptop keyboards every day because the laptop are very is very big and I can use the laptop keyboard to uh. It's everything.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I don't know how to run to keep hold on a keyboard because I can't. You learn that I always use the laptop to everything.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think I can check this about knowledges and, uh, to watching this knowledge is to run for me. I think it's very suitable and uh, uh, very fast fast for me.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: 你回答的意思可以理解,但表达不够清晰和连贯,语法和单词形式有错误,内容重复且超出必要信息。建议: 1) 直接用一句主题句回答问题并避免重复(例如:I prefer typing.)。 2) 用一到两句具体且连贯的支持细节,使用连接词(because / so / although)。 3) 注意主谓一致、单复数和词形(e.g. handwriting is, my handwriting is ugly)。 4) 控制长度在3-4句内,避免无意义停顿和重复词(very fast and very -> delete extra very)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and neater than my handwriting. My handwriting is quite messy, so typing helps me avoid mistakes and makes my work easier to read.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语法错误,句子不完整并有重复词和填充词。建议: 1) 明确直接回答(e.g. I use a laptop keyboard every day.)。 2) 用一到两句说明原因,提供具体细节(e.g. portability, convenience)。 3) 避免重复和语无伦次的填充词(uh, it's everything)。 4) 注意主谓一致和单数形式(a laptop is, the keyboard is)。
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is portable and convenient. I can work anywhere, and the built-in keyboard is comfortable for daily tasks.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: 回答不相关且含糊,表达混乱且语法错误严重。建议: 1) 直接给出时间点或阶段作为主题句(e.g. I learned to type when I was at school.)。 2) 提供简短具体的背景或方式(e.g. I practised with online lessons or at computer class)。 3) 避免不相关或错误的短语(don't know how to run to keep hold on a keyboard)。 4) 保持句子简短清晰,控制在2-3句内。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in middle school during computer class. Since then I have practised a lot on my laptop and improved my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且没有具体方法,存在大量填充词和错误词汇。建议: 1) 直接说明具体方法(e.g. I practice with online typing programs, set daily goals)。 2) 使用连接词说明步骤或效果(so / by / then),并给出具体频率或工具(e.g. 30 minutes a day, TypingClub)。 3) 删除无意义的重复和停顿词(uh, very fast fast)。 4) 用简洁清晰的句子展示因果关系与结果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising on online platforms like TypingClub for about 20 minutes every day. This helps me increase my speed and reduce errors.
× my handwriting are very ugly.
✓ my handwriting is very ugly.
“handwriting”是不可数名词或视为单一概念,应该用单数谓语“is”。将“are”改为“is”。建议:把名词类别(可数/不可数)记清楚,遇到不可数名词用单数动词。
× if I use this phone to type in, I think it's very fast and very.
✓ if I use my phone to type, I think it's very fast.
原句中“type in”可简化为“type”,句尾“and very”不完整。现在分词问题不明显,但句子结构不完整,按可接受表达改为完整句。建议:避免使用不完整的并列结构,确保句子完整。
× I use the laptop keyboards every day because the laptop are very is very big
✓ I use the laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is very big
“keyboard”在此指特定设备的一部分,应为单数“keyboard”;“laptop”是单数,应使用单数动词“is”。原句存在名词单复数与动词形式不一致。建议:核对主语单复数,动词要一致。
× the laptop are very is very big and I can use the laptop keyboard to uh.
✓ the laptop is very big and I can use the laptop keyboard.
含有多余的动词形式“are”与“is”重复,第三人称单数主语“the laptop”应使用“is”。删除冗余词并保持句子完整。建议:说话时注意不要重复动词,句子完成后再停顿。
× I don't know how to run to keep hold on a keyboard because I can't.
✓ I don't know how to keep my hands on the keyboard properly because I can't.
原句结构混乱,“run to keep hold on a keyboard”不合逻辑。按意图改为“how to keep my hands on the keyboard properly”。建议:表达动作时使用明确的动词短语(keep one's hands on the keyboard),避免直译。
× You learn that I always use the laptop to everything.
✓ You see, I always use the laptop for everything.
原句中“You learn that”不合语境且语法错误,应该为“you see”或省略;“use the laptop to everything”应为“use... for everything”。建议:学习常用口语连接词(如“I mean”,“you see”),并掌握固定搭配“use X for Y”。
× I think I can check this about knowledges and, uh, to watching this knowledge is to run for me.
✓ I think I can look up knowledge about this and watch videos to learn; that works for me.
原句中多处介词和搭配错误:“check this about knowledges”应为“look up knowledge about this”;“to watching this knowledge”错误,改为“watch videos to learn”。此外“knowledges”为不可数名词,不应加复数。建议:记住“knowledge”为不可数,常用搭配如“look up information/knowledge”,“watch videos to learn”。
× I think it's very suitable and uh, uh, very fast fast for me.
✓ I think it's very suitable and very fast for me.
重复词“fast fast”不正确,保持单一副词“very fast”。这里无现在分词需求,主要是删除重复。建议:说话时注意不要无意识重复单词,表达要简洁。