Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Basically, I prefer to hand typing because especially on the OR computer is very convenient and save time is more efficiency. So I am a good friend to typing on the computer.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, in nowadays we also I have a computer so I can text on the keyboard every day to chat with my friend or study. So I use it every day.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I really remember when I was a young kid, umm, in my primary school we have a course to teach you, to teach you how to type on the keyboard is very useful for me actually. But at that time, I feel a little bit difficult now.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I just uh, practice day by day and we have an app to practice the typing letters. Umm, like the most popular type apps in the China is uh, Jing Shan is very popular.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意表达的准确性和连贯性。回答要直接说出偏好(topic sentence),并用一到两句具体原因支持。避免语法错误和冗余词(如“hand typing”、“on the OR”)。可用连接词(because / so / therefore)使句子更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because using a computer is more convenient and saves time. For example, typing allows me to edit easily and finish tasks faster, so I often choose a keyboard for school and work.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要简洁并给出具体细节(desktop 或 laptop),避免模糊和重复。用一两句说明用途和频率,使用连词提高流畅性。注意语法(例如“nowadays”位置和主谓一致)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day. I usually type messages to my friends and do schoolwork on it, so it’s an essential part of my daily routine.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应包含明确的时间点和相关细节。先给出时间(topic sentence),然后简要说明学习方式和感受,避免时态混用和冗长口语填充词(umm)。可以用because或although连接感受。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school because my school offered a typing course. At first it was difficult, but regular practice made it much easier over time.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要具体说明练习方法和工具,并给出频率或效果。避免重复和无意义的口头语(uh, umm)。提及具体应用或练习内容并说明效果会更好。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day using a typing app. For instance, I use a popular Chinese app called Jing Shan to do timed exercises, which has helped me increase my speed and accuracy.
× Basically, I prefer to hand typing because especially on the OR computer is very convenient and save time is more efficiency. So I am a good friend to typing on the computer.
✓ Basically, I prefer typing by hand, but especially using a computer is very convenient and saves time, so I often type on the computer.
句子中多处介词和短语使用不当:"prefer to hand typing" 应为 "prefer typing by hand" 或直接 "prefer handwriting";"on the OR computer" 不合逻辑,改为 "using a computer";动词与主语不一致,"save time is more efficiency" 语序和词类错误,改为 "saves time" 并用原因关系连接。此外 "a good friend to typing" 是错误搭配,改为表达习惯性的说法如 "I often type on the computer"。建议多注意介词短语(by hand, on the computer, using)和主谓一致,简化句子使结构清晰。
× Yes, in nowadays we also I have a computer so I can text on the keyboard every day to chat with my friend or study. So I use it every day.
✓ Yes, nowadays I also have a computer, so I can type on the keyboard every day to chat with my friends or study. I use it every day.
错误主要是时态与词序问题:"in nowadays" 应为 "nowadays";多余的代词 "we also I" 应删除并保持主语一致;"text on the keyboard" 用词不当,改为更自然的 "type on the keyboard";另外复数 "friend" 应为 "friends"。建议注意时态副词位置、主语一致和词汇搭配(text 常指发短信,type 更贴合打字)。
× I really remember when I was a young kid, umm, in my primary school we have a course to teach you, to teach you how to type on the keyboard is very useful for me actually. But at that time, I feel a little bit difficult now.
✓ I clearly remember that when I was a young kid in primary school, we had a course that taught us how to type on the keyboard. It was very useful for me, although at that time I found it a little difficult.
句子中时态混用和代词不当:叙述过去的经历应使用过去时,"we have a course" 要改为 "we had a course";"to teach you, to teach you" 重复且不恰当,应改为被动或过去式 "that taught us";"is very useful for me actually" 叙述过去效果用过去时或现在完成时,这里改为过去式或说明持续影响可用现在完成时,这里用过去式更顺;最后一句时态混乱,"At that time, I feel a little bit difficult now" 要分开并调整为过去时 "I found it a little difficult"。建议保持时间线一致,过去的经历用过去时,并使用正确的代词(us, me)。
× I just uh, practice day by day and we have an app to practice the typing letters. Umm, like the most popular type apps in the China is uh, Jing Shan is very popular.
✓ I just practice day by day, and we have an app to practice typing letters. The most popular typing app in China is Jing Shan.
错误在于动词与 -ing 形式的使用不当:"practice the typing letters" 中不需要定冠词 "the",且应使用动名词 "typing" 表示动作;"type apps" 更自然为 "typing apps" 或 "typing app"(单数或复数一致);"in the China" 冠词使用错误,应为 "in China"。建议注意动名词用法(practice + -ing),以及中英文冠词习惯(China 前不加 the)。