Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one brief reason for typing and one clear, specific reason for handwriting using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "it feels"), avoid redundancy, and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing for everyday communication because it’s faster and more convenient for emails and messages. However, I like handwriting when I want to reflect, since writing by hand feels more personal and helps me process my thoughts. So I use typing for efficiency and handwriting for relaxation and clarity.

Gợi ý: Combine short fragments into full, flowing sentences and correct grammar (e.g., "it requires", "on a daily basis"). Be specific about which device and give one example of tasks. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "go hunting trends."

Ví dụ: Yes, I type every day on a laptop because I work as a copywriter. My tasks include drafting articles, researching trends online, and collaborating with teammates via chat and email, so I use the laptop constantly throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear time reference and reduce filler words like "honestly" and "maybe." Use one or two sentences with a specific age and a concise reason why it was memorable, avoiding repetition ("interesting" twice).

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about eight during a computer class at primary school. It was memorable because the old-fashioned computers were new and exciting to me, which made learning fun.

Gợi ý: Be specific about methods you use to improve typing and avoid vague or awkward phrasing. Start with a direct statement of your main method (daily practice), then give 1–2 concrete techniques (e.g., online typing tests, accuracy drills, proper posture). Remove unnecessary self-commentary like "I am very lucky."

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day, using online typing tests to track speed and accuracy. I also focus on accuracy drills and maintain good posture to reduce fatigue, which helps me write faster and more consistently.

× I can easily connect with both my daily life.

✓ I can easily connect with both in my daily life.

The original sentence misuses 'both' without specifying two items and the preposition. Adding 'in' makes the phrase 'in my daily life' correct. Alternatively, specify the two items after 'both' (for example, 'both typing and handwriting in my daily life').

× I prefer typing because it can be more convenient to a faster communication.

✓ I prefer typing because it can be more convenient for faster communication.

'to a faster communication' is incorrect: use the preposition 'for' to indicate purpose or suitability and no article before 'faster communication' is needed. Also 'a' is not used with uncountable noun 'communication'.

× But to relax and connect with my thoughts, I prefer handwriting because it's feel more special and personal.

✓ But to relax and connect with my thoughts, I prefer handwriting because it feels more special and personal.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) requires the singular verb 'feels' not 'feel'. This is a subject-verb agreement error: 'it' (singular) + 'feels'.

× Also I can understand my feelings in a better way.

✓ Also I can understand my feelings in a better way.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'in a better way' is slightly awkward; 'better' alone is more natural: 'I can understand my feelings better.' No change required by the provided list, but stylistic improvement suggested.

× I am a copywriter, so it's requires a lot of time for me to type, not just to create strategies but to go hunting trends and to communicate with my teammates.

✓ I am a copywriter, so it requires a lot of time for me to type, not just to create strategies but to hunt for trends and to communicate with my teammates.

The phrase 'it's requires' incorrectly combines contraction 'it's' with a verb. Use 'it requires' (third person singular) without the contraction. Also 'go hunting trends' should be 'hunt for trends' for correct verb and preposition usage.

× So it's really coming on my daily basis for me to type on keyword.

✓ So it really happens on a daily basis that I type on a keyboard.

'Coming on my daily basis' is incorrect; the idiom is 'on a daily basis'. 'Type on keyword' is incorrect: the intended noun is 'keyboard'. Also remove contraction to match formality: 'it really happens on a daily basis that I type on a keyboard.'

× Honestly, it was so many years ago.

✓ Honestly, that was many years ago.

'It was so many years ago' misuses 'it' and 'so'. Use 'that was many years ago' or 'it was many years ago' referring to the event; 'so' is unnecessary. Also better to specify 'that was' referring to learning.

× I was maybe 8 years old on my computer class at my school.

✓ I was maybe 8 years old in my computer class at school.

Use 'in' for being in a class and 'at my school' is redundant with 'in my computer class at school'; choose 'in my computer class at school' or 'in my school's computer class'.

× It was really interesting because back then technology was not advanced and that old fashioned computer was really thrilling for me and interesting.

✓ It was really interesting because back then technology was not advanced, and that old-fashioned computer was thrilling for me.

'Old fashioned' should be hyphenated 'old-fashioned' as a compound adjective before a noun. Avoid repeating 'really' and 'interesting'; streamline to avoid redundancy.

× By practicing every day, I think I find a strategic side to improve my typing.

✓ By practicing every day, I think I have found a strategic way to improve my typing.

'Find a strategic side to improve' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use 'have found' (present perfect) to indicate a result of ongoing practice and 'a strategic way to improve' uses the infinitive correctly.

× I consider myself as a person, I can chat really fast and send emails with a high speed, so I'm very lucky I need to say.

✓ I consider myself a fast typist: I can chat really fast and send emails quickly, so I think I'm very lucky.

'Consider myself as a person' is incorrect; use 'consider myself' without 'as'. 'With a high speed' is awkward; use 'quickly'. 'I need to say' is unnecessary and unnatural; replace with 'I think'. Also fix sentence structure and punctuation.